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by LBK

schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. It's raw and promising and i'm looking forward to more. Hope you update soon.

Wolf
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooooooo! I'm going on holiday on Saturday and won't have net access for a week! *sobs* Maybe I'll have a couple of chapters to come back to... ;)

One point, surely Gordon would be able to trace the line from which Bruce/Batman called him on - if he wanted to, that is?
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this - the details of the clues the Joker is leaving them are actually well thought out (which is more than I can say for my fanfic, lol). I also like how he is trying to undermine her confidence and make her feel like he is her best option by convincing her that no one is going to come for her. At least I think that's what you were starting to do :D.
Can't wait for more!
XX
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY WOW!!! So, he's gonna let her live. Is he a man of his word, or is this a another game??? MMMM.
Can't wait for more!!!
person Devryn
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOooh, nicely done so far! I can't wait for more! :D
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh crumbs! I am struggling to put together a Joker story and thought I'd read a few to get some inspiration - you have captured him perfectly! He's as scary as he is in The Dark Knight. Bravo, and more please!

Ani
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! Can't wait for more!!! Will Joker get to her before it's too late, MMMMMMMMMMMM.
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great, keep up the excellent work. I can't wait to read more. BTW, is there any way I can track your story and any others when you guys update? I'm fairly new to this site and am not familiar with how it works. Would love to get an e-mail every time people update.

Thanks and take care,
CC

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