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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! A new story!Great start...I was celebrating when she finally told Will about her feelings for Jack.
Seeing her so sad and heartbroken in the beginning of AWE,one really , simply HAS TO think that she LOVED Jack. And you wrote it perfectly!Thanks for that!
Will....ugh...I hate this guy! This stupid yeasty fish face almost forced himself on her!I'm so relieved that in the end he came to his senses and left her alone.Bastard!
Write more,mate!Asap!
Seeing her so sad and heartbroken in the beginning of AWE,one really , simply HAS TO think that she LOVED Jack. And you wrote it perfectly!Thanks for that!
Will....ugh...I hate this guy! This stupid yeasty fish face almost forced himself on her!I'm so relieved that in the end he came to his senses and left her alone.Bastard!
Write more,mate!Asap!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this, it has a lot of potential! Good job!