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January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why is there not more of this? This initial chapter is such a tease and desperately needs to be followed up!
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January 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WHY IS THERE NOT MORE OF THIS YET?! ITS SO AMAZING!!! I WANT TO READ MORE!!!
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August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That is hot cause the xeno had Dawn's naked body on him
Can't wait for the next chapters!!!
Can't wait for the next chapters!!!
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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
excellent story hope theirs more i really like that this alien has intellegence will he have a name definitely keep up the good work this is graet
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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay i can't wait
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what is going to happen next?!
its so awsome!!
its so awsome!!
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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeease write another chapter :D i'll love tou forevers!
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOhhh great start!! I hope you update soon!
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love the concept and how its written, please give us more! I'm desperate x]
I'm reading many fictions right now but yours is one of my favorites, like taking a bite of watermelon, so good but not nearly enough!
I'm reading many fictions right now but yours is one of my favorites, like taking a bite of watermelon, so good but not nearly enough!
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update this story? I like it so far and want to read more.