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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It looks like Sarah finally found out about her powers. Maybe the crystals will show her the truth of why she's there. Maybe once she learns about the Goblin City, she'll agree to fixing things. Although I can imagine she'd be pretty angry at Jareth for not telling her why she was there in the first place.
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to pop in and make sure everything is alright with you. I had to reread it again. *sigh* It really is such a beautifully written story. You are an incredibly talented authoress. I was reading the beginning summary again, how you said this would be 20 chapters or so...I am getting the feeling it's going to be more towards 50. They are only just barely acknowledging their feelings for each other, and it's at chapter 26....But I am happy. Because I am selfish enough to want you to continue this story forever, and more chapters equals more for me to read!! yay!! This is one of the stories I have most enjoyed reading in a very long time!! XXOO
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goddamnit, I'm getting deja vu here. The first words that want to come out of my keyboard are the exact same ones I told another author in my usual Games section haunt some two years ago... and since I can't think of anything better to say, here goes, and I mean this in the best, nicest, most sincere way possible.
I hate you.
I read through this in two large chunks (granted, with a three plus month gap in between), and... holy raptor-stomping pharaoh testicles, if this were Highlander, I would hunt you down and lop off your head. The only real niggling flaws I can ever find (for whatever my opinion's worth) are the occasional grammar and syntax errors, and maybe, maybe a pacing hiccup here or there. Well, and paragraphs the size of Russia, but still, holy shit!
I can't process where to start praising, seeing for how long the review would end up as... well, I'd have to take several hours just to figure out what to say, anyways. In short: you, story, amazing, more, soon, please, thank you.
I hate you.
I read through this in two large chunks (granted, with a three plus month gap in between), and... holy raptor-stomping pharaoh testicles, if this were Highlander, I would hunt you down and lop off your head. The only real niggling flaws I can ever find (for whatever my opinion's worth) are the occasional grammar and syntax errors, and maybe, maybe a pacing hiccup here or there. Well, and paragraphs the size of Russia, but still, holy shit!
I can't process where to start praising, seeing for how long the review would end up as... well, I'd have to take several hours just to figure out what to say, anyways. In short: you, story, amazing, more, soon, please, thank you.
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! If only the little one can help get them together withough getting herself into trouble! I can't wait for more!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter,thanks. I know how it is when work and home and all of that can cause problems to get back here so I am just glad you are back. I always look up your story so even if there isn't a new chapter I just wait. I will keep waiting. I am writing a romance, comedy, action triolgy myself about the Predators called A Strange Match and starting the second one called A Strange Home. I am going to add some tragedy into the second one and the third. I don't work yet although I have been putting in applications. It sucks out there so hope your job is a good one and if it is hang onto it. Once again great story and I liked this chapter a lot.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I am going to have to haunt you now with frightening tales of Sesame street if you don't update soon. Either that or send lemmings to your home. They follow each other copying each other, it is really creepy.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you plan on continuing soon, it's been quite a long time since your last update.
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I have a wish (not like you writing this amazing story fulfills my wishes in the first place):
Jareth refuses to fulfill Sarah's "needs" and, to torture him, she masturbated infront of the mirror =D
I mean think of it! Jareth all blue-balled but telling himself that the can't actually take her and then hearing his name comming from her room...He's curious and so he sneaks a peak through the mirror to see what it is she could POSSIBLY be doing and sees her all splayed out for him! Forget WHY Sarah would do that in front of a mirror, that's not important, the highly amazing masterbation scene that takes place on BOTH sides of the mirror is what is important!
Jareth refuses to fulfill Sarah's "needs" and, to torture him, she masturbated infront of the mirror =D
I mean think of it! Jareth all blue-balled but telling himself that the can't actually take her and then hearing his name comming from her room...He's curious and so he sneaks a peak through the mirror to see what it is she could POSSIBLY be doing and sees her all splayed out for him! Forget WHY Sarah would do that in front of a mirror, that's not important, the highly amazing masterbation scene that takes place on BOTH sides of the mirror is what is important!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I read half of this last night, and the other half today. I actually read the one shot first. I was looking for something new to read, all the other stuff I read, I am waiting for updates on, and I myself, and struggling through a bit of writers block, and am trying to work through it. So glad I found the one shot, that lead me to this, wonderful, wonderful, work of art. ^.^ Words usually fail me when I review such
a fantastic story such as this, but I will try my best to give you a well deserved kudos. ^.^ When I am reading your story, I feel as if, I am either watching it as a movie, or I am peering through Jareth's mirror. You descriptions are nothingless than devine, and I became so engrossed in it, that I snapped at anyone that ripped me from the lovely tale you have woven. Last night, and today, when I stopped reading, it honestly took me a little while to get adjusted to being back in the "real world", and not in the "Underground", I honestly felt like I was there, and few stories have done that to me. Your story leaves me with such a happy, and dreamy feeling. *sigh* I do have to say though, that in the last chapter, Jareth was being a bit of a whiny bitch, about his inner turmoil. He reminded me of a 14 year old girl, bitching and moaning about life, and acting all angsty. I half expected him to pull out a little unicorn diary, and start writing in it, while listening to
some equally angsty music. LOL. ^.^ I heart Jareth, and David Bowie, and I heart you!! Oh, by the way, there is a movie he did, that I love, I saw it ages ago, and I haven't been able to find it since, nor have I found anyone else that has seen it, which is a shame, because it was fantastic. It's called, "The Linguine Incident". Please tell me you've seen it? Well, thank you for sharing this lovely lovely story with us. I know how much effort it takes to work, and well...have a life, and still write a story, and put enough time in it, to meet your standards, and to not feel rushed, and not keep your readers waiting too long. So, thank you, take your time!! XXOO And I agree with you about people needing to review more. It's agravating to see the counter climbing, and the votes, and reviews remain low. We as writers need feedback, even if it's to tell us we suck, or that you like it!! XXOO
a fantastic story such as this, but I will try my best to give you a well deserved kudos. ^.^ When I am reading your story, I feel as if, I am either watching it as a movie, or I am peering through Jareth's mirror. You descriptions are nothingless than devine, and I became so engrossed in it, that I snapped at anyone that ripped me from the lovely tale you have woven. Last night, and today, when I stopped reading, it honestly took me a little while to get adjusted to being back in the "real world", and not in the "Underground", I honestly felt like I was there, and few stories have done that to me. Your story leaves me with such a happy, and dreamy feeling. *sigh* I do have to say though, that in the last chapter, Jareth was being a bit of a whiny bitch, about his inner turmoil. He reminded me of a 14 year old girl, bitching and moaning about life, and acting all angsty. I half expected him to pull out a little unicorn diary, and start writing in it, while listening to
some equally angsty music. LOL. ^.^ I heart Jareth, and David Bowie, and I heart you!! Oh, by the way, there is a movie he did, that I love, I saw it ages ago, and I haven't been able to find it since, nor have I found anyone else that has seen it, which is a shame, because it was fantastic. It's called, "The Linguine Incident". Please tell me you've seen it? Well, thank you for sharing this lovely lovely story with us. I know how much effort it takes to work, and well...have a life, and still write a story, and put enough time in it, to meet your standards, and to not feel rushed, and not keep your readers waiting too long. So, thank you, take your time!! XXOO And I agree with you about people needing to review more. It's agravating to see the counter climbing, and the votes, and reviews remain low. We as writers need feedback, even if it's to tell us we suck, or that you like it!! XXOO
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Psha..like Jareth hasn't already fallen for her, stupid male can't see the forest for the trees. They're both already head over heels for the other. sigh....Should Sarah find out about Toby, Jareth won't be able to glitter away fast enough to escape her rage, he'll be luck to have a kingdom left for that matter. And as for using her as a tool...I don't think that idea will be around very long...especially if they finally do give into their emotions and do the boom boom, that idea go bye bye real quick then...tee hee...i love this story, and it is well worth the wait so don't feel rushed...later!!