rate_review Reviews

Using Sarah as a tool huh? I know who's the tool here. Geez. Jareth get a grip. Make her love you, she old enough now, be nice, take her like rabid monkeys in the spring time, have lots of Goblin king babies and repoulate the city. How hard is that to figure out?

i think that's why i don't like to read lemons. there are only so many ways one can describe the act, then it becomes redundant and i would rather experience it than read about it. fade to the waves crashing against the rocks...

he's thinking himself in circles. if he's becoming emotionally entangled, how would he think those feelings would effect a mere human girl. he's not thinking how sarah feels and how her feelings could make or break him. if he gets on her wrong side and she figures out she has power she could become a very dangerous adversary or she could leave him high and dry. kidnapping her brother again isn't going to have the effect he hopes and will not give him her willing cooperation and may even twist her magic in unpleasant ways. shackles and fetters-- boy needs to whimper and beg.

Whoa! I never expected to see another chapter just after I finished reading the others! That, like, never happens around here :)

Short chappie, true, but I liked it anyway. It's both funny and frustrating how Jareth is trying to convince himself that he will be able to go through with his plans without falling for her, 'cuz we all know he's already screwed. Too bad he can't just realize that maybe if he just treated her with genuine affection, she would probably do anything for him. And yet, at the same time, I'm so glad he doesn't realize it because it makes things ever so much more delicious.

I could live off tension. The more a story has, the more I love it. The little observations, bursts of sudden emotion, hints of things to come, the advance and retreat of characters, it's all so delectable. I look forward to that stuff more than I do to the characters going at it most of the time - especially if it's well-paced and well-done. This story, my dear, is both. Add to that Jareth's dispassionate disposition getting cracked by Sarah's fiery temper and it's just...fabulous. I can't say it enough.

Looking forward to more (when you have the time, of course - don't rush!)

~cu-kid

Nice chapter.
I hope it will be more interaction between them in the next chapter.

*takes deep breath*

OH MY FREAKIN' GOD!

Most of the time, I'm way more articulate than that. I've only found one other Labyrinth story on this site that has enthralled me. I have just read everything you have posted so far straight through. My eyes are burning (because I'm sure I haven't blinked once in twenty-four chapters), I feel a little light-headed (because I know I stopped breathing during the last part of the last chapter - and several times during previous chapters), and I'm exhausted - all of which are very good things! Because it's rare for me to find something that manages to make me sit still for...however long it just took me to read this.

I love love LOVE this story! I love the insights into Jareth and Sarah. I love the way Jareth thinks he wants her to be submissive when it's her very rebelliousness that ignites so much feeling in him. I love the way he struggles with it and yet Sarah still has no clue (although, I think with the last chapter, she's sort of starting to get it a little). I am such a sucker for unreleased sexual tension, and this story has it in spades. I'm dying from the tension and yet don't want it to end!

FABULOUS job so far!! I'm an addict to this story already, so I'm hoping your updates won't be too few and far between.

~cu-kid

YES!!! Chapter 25 and another stalemate. Damnit will Jereth ever get those tighty whites out of his behind and just let the emotions come. He may suprise himself and get Sarah to be his Queen. Ok, I am done with my rant. Thanks for the update!

Jolly good stuff. I ahte Sarah leaving herself so weak by saying all he ahd to do was ask but perhaps it's best for His insercurities. My goodness the Goblin king with insurcurities..the worlds gonna end.

Jereth is a tease and he is going to get it. Sarah one of these times is just going to grab his scrawny but and force him to admit he loves her the fricking dork. He should just give it up. I mean he is like standing there with a damn tent in his pants and he doesn't even know how to camp. If he did he wouldn't be just standing there letting Sarah ogle him, then again he does like that so why not just offer her a strip show. It doesn't take a lot of talent for him to start swinging on a pole in his tighty whities. Maybe silver speedos? Whatever will work for him at this point because he is being rather crazy, like is he on some kind of pills for bi polar or what?

well, he did take her up on her offer to forget the encounter. how else was she to respond to the exclamation?

one also wonders why i end up reading your chapters at four in the morning, without fail. *yawns*

i don't know why he seems so gleeful, he's just as affected as she is. was his meek and mild routine just an act or is there a few disjointed personalities floating around in his head?

nice kiss by the way. as soon as someone writes overused descriptions like: 'asking for entrance', 'tongues battling for dominance' i start to cringe uncontrollably and refuse to go on. thank you for fresh and exciting!

♥always a delight♥
ginny

Well Jareth seems to be back to his old self....whether that is a good or bad thing for Sarsh is debatable, at least they are both starting to open up about the mutual physical attraction they have for one another. If things had kept going like they had though, poor Curlique would have learned how babies were made first hand..lmao...it seems that Sarah and Jareth are finally loosening up and i say it's about damn time!!! Can't wait to see what you come up wih next!!!