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Nice chapter. I'm in a hurry to see what Sarah gonna do with the kiss scene.
Waiting impatiently for the next chapter.

she's gotta get into some black leather and satin and dress the part. a nice leather bustier, long satin wrap skirt--purple or dark red, stiletto heels, hair--up and messy. or *checks closet* how about--a '30's vintage 'vamp' gown with beaded bodice in clingy silk crêpe. just ignore me, i hadn't worn that dress in almost three decades (yes i still have it[and others], it's the color of the navigation tabs on affn). if one is going to stage a coup d'état one must have the necessary weapons in one's arsenal.

one hopes she can get him to spill. one believes she would willingly help him restore his kingdom to to it's former glory, all he has to do is be honest and ask, without all of his subterfuge and deception. she is a very caring and helpful person.

thank you,
ginny

This is very good. Hopefully Sarah won't completely ruin things with Jereth who is starting to show some feelings in there.

Hi! I have just started your story and I am really enjoying it. I always wanted a sequel to Labyrinth, to see Sarah and Jareth together again. I like how your staying true to the characters and giving them a chance to develop feelings for each other in a realistic way. Their interaction is very angsty, I love it. I'm looking forward to when they finally admit their feelings and we can see where this relationship will go. The Toby issue is going to cause problems, obviously, and I am curious how the play and performance will go, so I am can't wait for the next update. Keep writing :)

I have to say, I like your story, and I am looking forward to more. I just found it last night and will say, I'm disappointed it's still in the process of being written. I will eagerly look for more updates as time goes on, but I hope you finish this soon! The tension is driving me mad.

:P

overwhelmed-- one hopes the stresses of life ease up on you and you can find a moments respite in your own cushioned oubliette.

nice that she's thinking about possibilities, maybe she could, as a test, wish for a few 'creature comforts' in her hideaway.

i'm just teasing, you know i love ya♥
ginny

Thank you that chapter was a lovely view into characters mind sets. It was also time to catch own our breath from the whirlwind of Lust spite and arrogance that is the Sarah/Jareth show. *meow* I still think Jareths has some tormoent coming too him but no longer think he should go out the window.

This is cool, but if she hid herself how was he going to keep up that lame excuse that his tennis elbow was keeping him from entering her room? Sure it is bad he spys on her, but maybe he could like write something good instead of stupid and like seduce her rather then make the play into 'all about his feelings'. A play isn't the same as being ravished. He needs to just do that and then he won't have to worry about acting. He forgets his lines all the time. I mean since the guy can't act he might as well just be himself. Oh, that would require emotions, duh.....I forgot Jereth is a dork.

oh wow...the play is a little out there, with Sarah falling head over heels for the gobiln king and all, and being willing to give up Toby, but geeze he very effectivly told Sarah how he felt four years prior...and Sarah seemed to have understood, and showed him the affection he so desperately desired, she broke his heart, and he was being wise not to let himself fall so easily twice, but it is already too late...he is desperately in love with the girl, and she is falling hopelessly in love with him. Her actions on the stage after his monolog show that their is hope for the relationship...and poor Curlique's sence of timeing is horrible, if she hadn't said anything, they would have had a nice tender kiss, and thru it been able to read the others true feelings, or if nothing else be able to forgive each other a little. I still wonder if the boy Eldrich has is really Toby or not, if it is and Sarah finds out...she may not be able to forgive Jareth, no matter how much she loves him....

one doesn't understand his reasoning and thought process. maybe it's from being around goblins all of the time he's begun thinking like one. how is kidnapping her brother again going to endear him to her. one believes that if he's thinking of using the boy as a last resort bargaining chip, he miscalculated--she'll fry his skinny ass.

oh it's so comforting to sit in a moldy old oubliette on a convenient rock. i'm all for that, really, i would rather hide under the bed. there are probably spiders--nasty giant ones--that talk.

oh well, i didn't make much sense but i'm too tired to come up with witty, you'll just have to settle for humorless and tedious.

here make some

irish potatoes

♦ 1/4 cup butter, softened
♦ 1/2 (8 ounce) package cream cheese
♦ 1 teaspoon vanilla extract
♦ 4 cups confectioners' sugar
♦ 2 1/2 cups flaked coconut
♦ 1 tablespoon ground cinnamon


DIRECTIONS

1. In a medium bowl, beat the butter and cream cheese together until smooth. Add the vanilla and confectioners' sugar; beat until smooth. Using your hands if necessary, mix in the coconut. Roll into balls or potato shapes, and roll in the cinnamon. Place onto a cookie sheet and chill to set. If desired, roll potatoes in cinnamon again for darker color.

*Stud each 'potato' with a few small pieces of chopped nuts to simulate a potato's 'eyes'.

a pleasure,
ginny