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Nice chapter love Jareth rained himself in very well. Must have confused Sarah even more. Not much time gotta rush to work..I
ll give you dirty ideas in the next review.

That line he made her say was so dang lame. Fear me. Is that supposed to be romantic? She should have just said to him fear me and kiss me again like you did unless you are a chicken. Then bocked at him. Maybe then he would do something interesting. Anyway, this chapter was good, but why the hell had they been interupted. What a pain in the but, also Jereth still can't act. He can't write very well either if he wanted to impress Sarah. Oh well, he is good at acting like himself and she should call him an ass more often. Afterall, she isn't a little girl anymore and the day the dork figures that out he may get somewhere. It is like totally 'I can bring home the bacon, fry it up in a pan, and never let you forget your a man cause Sarah is a woman, asulee?' Or Yo, dude I like grew boobs see? I totally am out of my training bra. When will he realize that he is like a man and she is like a woman. Sheesh..........Sarah isn't just a girl in the world although that is all he wants her to be......No Doubt......

oh i think he's cracking, but i believe it's his brain.

♠ and now for a pink floyd moment:

Good morning, Worm your honor.
The crown will plainly show
The prisoner who now stands before you
Was caught red-handed showing feelings
Showing feelings of an almost human nature;
This will not do.
...
Crazy,
Toys in the attic I am crazy,
Truly gone fishing.
They must have taken my marbles away.
...
Crazy,
Over the rainbow, I am crazy,
Bars in the window.
'The Trial' ~Roger Waters

so is he serious about the script or is there a 'real one' that has nothing to do with their past encounter? or even shows what actually happened?

he gives her a clue that he isn't totally heartless and than just dismisses her. my husband with his schizophrenic, paranoid, delusional, fractured mind has got nothing on jareth. sometimes i have difficulty dealing with him but i would actually kill jareth... then i would rip out the water cooler, toss it out the window and run away.

♥ a frustratingly dubious pleasure ♥
♥♥♥you know i love ya♥♥♥
ginny

Loved this chapter.
Waiting impatiently for your next update.

So Jareth is starting to realize his true feelings for Sarah, nothing like a little scare to bring out the truth in ones innerself. But he done mucked up again, losing a perfectly good opportunity to ravish an obviously more than willing Sarah, by letting his temper get the better of him. Now Sarah is not going to be as receptive of his advances anymore, or so she says i don't think her resolve will stay very strong if he kisses her like that again;)...Jareth has some serious payback heading his way in the near future if he keeps his little game up...well loved the chapter and eargerly await the next one, i like the pace the story is taking and i agree you can't rush a good romance...lol later!!

Nice chapter.

Finally! a kiss.
Update soon I need to know what happen next.

You know when Sarah has enough of his male pms (which is actually a real thing)and he backs of again she'll proably magic him tied down on her bed naked and go all Warrior woman on his ass. And he'll love it. Asshole. LOL Maybe she should just put on a little show for him. Relieve her own tensionw ithout a care with him watching. Might lead him to get a clue and do it himself.

Jareth took Sarah's note book!!! the cheeky bastard using Sarahs note book to make a play outta it then going and changing things around so Sarah gives up Toby...yeah like that would happen...i wonder if Eldrich really has Toby, or if he got the wrong kid...that would be hilarious if he did, then Jareth would lose his plan B...it would soo serve him write if that did happen...poor Sarah is heart broken because of unrequainted love, and who could blame her for thinking that way, Jareth goes hot and cold at the drop of a hat. Seriously he is either seriously pmsing, or is still going through puberty.I swear Jareth is worse than a bloody teenager trying to deal with their first crush. He seriously needs to learn how to treat Sarah, and get over his damned ego, if he keeps this up he'll lose her, and i don't think she'll be so willing to forgive a third time around...loved the chapter can't wait to see what you come up with next...hopefully a little rebellion on Sarahs part*crosses fingers* and maybe a little of Jareth being caught by Sarah in his jammies(provided he wears any tee hee)oh the possibilities.....*evil grin*

Romance, then stupidity. Sounds familiar. I know how it is when a man misses you that desperately and that can sometimes lead to such powerful emotions that one forgets themselves. That was wonderful and perfect. I honestly think that Jereth had a right to be angry in some ways and it was refreshing to see him heartbroken for a second making him realize what he could lose. Now that he knows it is possible to lose Sarah forever I wonder what leaps and bounds he is willing to go through to keep her as his own. Still don't think he can act though.......or write..........