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Oh god, that chapter was such a tease. So short! ;_; I'm stuck checking for updates each day thanks to you. Just don't stop being consistant. :D

i've got a set of shackles, chains and a variety of whips if she needs them...

is this a test to see what provokes her and her magic or is he looking for a dom?

fun stuff!

♥ delighted ♥
ginny

Well lets hope the size of his ego is complimented elsewhere as well *waggles eyebrows* I can't believe he's dragging toby into this as well. He's trying to get her on side not too throw him out the closest window. I wonder how fast he can change into owl form. Besides surely by now he realises that Sarahs will when it comes to protecting Toby is way beyond anything he could hope to match. Her magic would more then likely nulify anything he tried to do with the boy.

Jereth didn't even finish the stupid play? What an avid procrastinator. He is definately not what Darwin would approve of as mating material for a worthy female if he can't even finish what he started. Finish what he started........hn......that could mean many things you know like time alone in the bedroom doing his business. I swear that tennis elbow of his will not get any better if he doesn't let his putter finally hit those balls making it completely blue.
Now let me see, he is going to use Toby to get to Sarah, but that is no way to woo a woman. I think he needs to go through some dating 101 classes or something because he has no idea on what to do so he is jacking himself all up. By the time he is done Sarah will have him running after his own tail in circles rather than getting the tail he wants from her.

Nice chapter.

I believe an added handsome male character is in dire need in this story to get that pain in the ass to act. Perhaps a bit of jealousy is just what the doctor ordered and Sarah should have nibbled that frickin dork's ear. I can't believe how he didn't ravish her and how she let him get away with not doing it. While making out she could have gotten the journal back.......or just made out some more........or gotten the journal and made out some more leading to ravishing. Either way, great chapter and I just hope Jereth can act because he is doing a lousy job so far. Sarah like 10 and Jereth only like 2 on the bed post marks of who seduced who. I really think Jereth needs to learn the word 'win' rather than the word I am a pretty boy cad who can't get a date. What a dork.

I figured I have been reading this from day one, I better review, bare with me....english is not my first language.

Jareth better be careful or he's gonna get more then just a magic backlash. He's moods are going carzier then a monkey in mating season.
WHat did you mean when in the Libaray scene Jareth stopped, thinking that is he 'had her' it would forfiet his kingdom? WOuldn't she be alluring with her magical abilities..an asset.? Not to mention having Sarah herslef.

ohhh boy Jareth fucked up big time, and Sarah is beyond pissed. But she's got every right to be pissed...he was being a royal git!! somebody needs to beat down that jinormous ego of his, and I think Sarah is just the person to do it, and they need to break that spell over Curlique, it's just causing Jareth and Sarah more problems than it is worth. And Sarah may be slightly spoiled, but he is the one bringing out the bitch in her with his horomonal swings, and he is just as guilty of spoiling her, though possibly unintentionally on his part, by showering her with gifts. Are we absolutly certain Jareth isn't PMSing? His mood swings put mine to shame on my worst days, honestly if anyone is spoiled he is....anyhow loved the chapter...can't wait to see what waits around the bend...

Nice chapter.

It would be fun if another Fae character could be integrated and put a lot jealous Jareth. Maybe it could eliminate his pride.

Fool of a man hesitated. Why do they like to do that? Infuriate what they want only to make them both miserable. I am certain Jereth will get his chance though to touch her once he gets over his fears. What a nincompoop, what an ultra maroon. This is a great story by the way and still waiting for Jereth's turn to be half naked in front of Sarah since she had to suffer him looking at things he shouldn't have seen yet. Turn about is fair play I say.