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by TheArtist

schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
actually, the flower's are a scene from the movie 'pink floyd the wall', i prefer the music from the live version but the movie has it's merits.

jareth needs to realize that to be an effective actor one needs to draw on existing emotions -- and that she may not have shared 'everything' with her little goblin friend.

expand your horizons! ~ rin` ~ traditional japanese with an edge:
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i'm enjoying this entertaining and amusing story! another plus is that you update frequently!

♥ domo arigatou gozaimasu ♥
ginny

schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*run to read the chapter*
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter.I'm in a hurry to read the next one.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update as soon as you can and write a long chapter.
I'm in a hurry for what happen next.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More I read this story, more I like it.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter and I hope his plan gone a change because he will fall for her.
person Vyper
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, let's hope the King didn't get his hopes completely crushed. I think Sarah might have been more willing had he held her and gently consoled her fears letting her know he cares. That would be a great way to woo her although he is afraid to show weakness. Perhaps it would have endeared her to him more and let her put her trust in him which would have helped his plans. Foolish man will definately get tennis elbow at this rate while beating himself silly to get rid of those blue balls if he doesn't figure out how to seduce a little virgin to his will. Now that would take power and making her love him would make him exceedingly powerful. After all how can one rule the world if one does not have such power since love is the most powerful thing in the world making even him do foolish things hmmmmmmmmm? Ah well, such is life. Men, the creatures are so simple to please and yet make such things so complex when women are not that difficult to figure out. Some flowers, candlight, a little soft music, poetry, chocolates, seduction, what is missing, oh the mood........and a nice slow dance for them both with her only in her nighty and he only in a pair of silk pj pants with his shirt open. Bring on the novel my dear...........
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sarah

Nice chapter.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter.