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wow that is cool about out b-days....i don't know about any spells but it seemed to be a little more than just a little enchantment on sarahs part to have the goblin king that excited, and sarah didn't seem to be imune to the effects either...can't wait to see the sparks fly...

Nice beginning.

I think I'm gonna love this story.

Wow you'r a good writer. I like the way you descript jareth's thought.
nice one.

*shakes head* the duplicity and intrigue that two people can get into! immaturity, misunderstandings and stupidity abound. i think the goblins would have less trouble. he doesn't realize that she was just as affected by the 'heat' as he was -- until...

funny stuff, if only he would stop being so full of himself and quit the games he may get what he wants and what he needs.

sorry about last time, i can never get to sleep and i never get enough.

a great video, i know it's in japanese but it's a video and not only does it have great music with some great voices, there is a story! kind of reminiscent of the basic theme of most faery tales. just copy/paste the following code into youTube search: zVxogdi76SE

i've been on a pink floyd kick so be happy i didn't leave you a code for 'the wall' 'what shall we do now' video >=) bad flowers! oh, what the heck! here it is: RXr_pJXKQAY

♥enjoy!
ginny

LOL Sarah is in hot water

I wonder how the poor man will sate his lust? Beating on things will only last so long and might give him tennis elbow........oh how lewd. heheheheheeeeee

OMG...i just found this story and i have to say it is absolutly wonderfull!!!!I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

a play? with a goblin cast? one thinks he's had a little too much wine or all his blood rushed somewhere other than his head. the one on his shoulders.

and she agreed to produce it. lol

i'm tired, half asleep and can't think. please, just pretend this says something complimentary and pertinent, okay? g'nite.

♥thank you♥
ginny

Very nice. Jereth is indeed a bit of a romantic. To woo and win his Lady would be a nice touch. I just hope Sarah also becomes a bit kinder to the King and that there is no tricks between the two of them. It would be nice to see the romantics have a chance at love. Still, it is yours so have fun and once again, keep writing. I am writing a Queen of the Damned story if you wish to review mine called What will he do? under Queen of the Damned movies. I usually only write Inuyasha stuff, but since Labryth was another favorite for me I appreciate your writing very much.