rate_review Reviews

Mmm, it was angsty in the beginning, but not too much. And Yoda amused me immensely. Awesome. And that was one of the sexiest sex scenes I've read in a really long time. With two of my favourite ever characters, to boot! Love the pairing, and love the writing. Awesome.

Superb. I come back and read this story frequently, as it is probably one of my favorite Qui/Obi stories, perhaps the best I've ever read.

This was absolutely amazing. It had all the elements I look for in a starwars story. You've pulled this off flawlessly. Thank you for letting me read this!!!

I really liked this PWP (Porn WITH Plot) fanfiction; first, I like the couple, second I love how you described the sex scene,and the absence of most clichès common in slash fanfiction (Example: penises that stays hard for hours). I also liked your characterization of Qui Gon (though I had to laugh in some parts, because you see, in my languagee "qui" means "here", lol), how he ended up being too concerned in concealing his own feelings that he didn't realize Obi loved him in return.

PS: Don't speak nonsense! I would never slaughter such a good story! Don't worry!

This is the first Star Wars fic I've ever read, and while I'll admit to not being a Star Wars fan, I liked this story. I don't pretend to understand training bonds, Padawans, or the Force, but I do appreciate good writing, and I think this was quite well written. It was tender and intimate, and I think you did a great job on Qui Gon's angst in particular. It had a nice introspective quality, a sort of quiet brooding to it. Again, I admit to not being familiar with the character, but this is the impression I got from your writing of him, which I liked very much.