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for Love, Lust and Explosives

by Lulu

person Mademoiselle
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok.
The Joker really needs to find her. O.o NOW!
There so cute toghether.
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, thanks for listing my story as reccomended reading. That was very sweet of you. ^.^ Secondly, I again, choked on a liquid because of something you wrote. The giant space shuttle humping squid, and the Joker's confusion as to what it was for, and his delight in finding out how it worked. You have a knack for writing these really funny and random things that just kill me. LOL. I sincerely hope that ickle Mr. Crow, ad Dr. West do not find Violet before the Joker does. I can only imagine all the nasty things he has planned for poor Violet. I also love Mr. Crow's attraction to Dr. West, and I find his annoyance with the doctor's obession with Violet funny. ^.^ Maybe he will spot Violet on the bench, and drive away before Dr. West spots her, thwarting the "good" doctor's plans for his reunion. *smiles hopefully* I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED the Joker's reaction to his scorched hideout, and his worry for Violet's safety. I thought that the cop would wet himself before the Joker was through with him. Or maybe he did, and you were kind enough to give him a bit of dignity. LOL. I was alos a bit worried for his henchmen. I thought perhaps they would soil themselves at the Joker's every changing moods. I would have thought that the insane laughter would have driven the poor guys to insanity. LOL. I also love their names. Ones that Mr. Stitches has given them I suppose? ^.^ Hurray that they finally realize that they love each other, or at least something like love that the two crazies they are, are capable of. ^.^ I loved the interaction with the bum, and his advice to her. Pretty poetic and insightful for a hobo. LOL. The line about her not even having sense enough to wear shoes was great. I'm with Violet there. I hate to wear shoes, and I am forever going bare-foot, stubbing my toes on things, and cutting the bottoms of my feet. LOL. I on my knees, praying that Joker will find Violet first...although, it would be an interesting twist, if the doctor got her first, and the Joker going on a wild, rage induced rampage through the city, tearing it appart, looking for Violet. And it would be even more interesting to see what kinds of delicious torture Mr. Stitches would have in store for the evil bastard. I shall be eagerly waiting. XXOO
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww...could Joker possibly love Violet? Otherwise why would he react that way about "the body" when he discovered his mansion in burning shambles? Well, he definitly feels some-thing for the girl...whether it be love or not. I especially got a kick outta the part about the giant squid humping the space shuttle looking thingy and how he cant imagine how to use it but he'll have fun figuring it out LMAO!!! For real hun I love your sense of humor that you've given Joker!! And just imagining him throwing a temper trantrum like that is really actually kinda cute Lol! BTW I also like the persona you've given our dear ole Mr. Crow. The name fits him due to his personality. Really, guys like that give me the heeby-jeeby creeps and you really depict him well in my opinion. You manage to not say a whole lot, but you get the point across. Does that make sense? UPDATE SOOON PLEASE!!!!
person Kameya
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Once again it was really well done i couldn't stop laughing when i read this
"There was this one thing that looked sort of like a giant squid humping the space shuttle"

very funny i so think Joker would think soemthing like that of a novelty item
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story yesterday and I absolutley love it! It keeps getting better and better. Don't stop reviewing!
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, now itīs getting really exciting! The Jokerīs reaction was great, just as I imagined he would be. And I love how he cares so much for Violet. I think itīs so sweet that all he cared about was his little firebug, he could care less any of the other stuff in the mansion.
I really like the way you made it clear that he cared a lot for Violet, yet you didnīt make him all sappy. It was totally in character and believable. Nicely done!

I really like these two as a couple. Itīs a hot, steamy relationship, and they seem to complement each other so well!! I canīt wait for the update! Iīm especially anticipating what the JOker will do if he happens to come in contact with Dr.Wolf..since heīs very possesive it would be great to see how he reacts to Dr.Wolf trying to take his woman away.

I love this story, iīm so hooked on it!
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I can't wait until the Joker finds hee. And I hope he finds her before the Doctor does! grr. I'm glad you're enjoying my story too. Update soon! this is my favorite story on here :)

Krystal
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic Chapter! Just can't wait for the real drama to start. What will Mr.J do!? And will Dr. Wolf get to Violet before he does!? Can't wait for more!
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaah!! Hand to God, I was honestly *just* thinking about you, and when you were going to update again. And here it is. My heart skipped with joy. ^.^ Wow, Violet is in a crazy trance. I wonder if she is going to start lighting random things on fire....cause that would be super. ^.^
Poor Joker. All his usual pick me ups aren't working. Is it because he *lurves* her? Hmmmm? I can only imagine what a drunk Joker will be like. I am sorry this review isn't longer, but I have the most awful headache right now. I apologize. *hugs* XXOO Can't wait to find out what will happen next. And I hope that you continue to find the will to write. I know what that's like, and it's a reall awful feeling.

schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah! Whats next?! Whats next?! Im so sooo glad you finally updated. I was beginning to worry that you werent going to! We've had way too many of those! This is too good and unique to be just dropped. You must must must keep it going! Im on edge trying to think of whats gonna happen when Joker finds his place in absolute ruin and Violet gone. I couldnt help but laugh and say "Uh oh" at him thinking of his perfectly good bed back at the mansion and the sweet little body that might be in it. Ooo if he only knew... Well, pretty soon he will huh? I also got a kick out of the last part with Violet lighting that cigarette for the man. Thats really something I can see her doing and it lets the readers know just how far gone she really is. Keep up the good work and Please, please PLEASE update again soon!!!! Your suspense is kill-ing me here!!! BTW Thank you for the complement on my name Teeheehee Friends say it really fits me...Lol *smiles and emits evil laugh*

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