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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the ending actually!It was a fitting ending to a good story. Hope you write something more!
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I wasn't expecting it to end there, but you did a good job with it. It was kind of sad with Will being killed and whatnot, but it seems it kind of had to be done. At least Jack or Lizzie (but especially Jack!) didn't get hurt in the process.
I liked this story a lot, it was a great read! I look forward to seeing more from you.
~Princess of the Pearl
I liked this story a lot, it was a great read! I look forward to seeing more from you.
~Princess of the Pearl
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was a really cute chapter! Although now I'm even more worried about Will coming along and ruining it all!
Great job, up to par, as always!
~Princess of the Pearl
Great job, up to par, as always!
~Princess of the Pearl
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Yes…after the old miserable barnacle himself.” Ha! That made me laugh out loud.
So Will won't hurt Jack or Lizzie (even though he'll try)? That's a relief.
And baby makes three, how exciting!
Good chapter, as always. Keep up the good work! I love this story!
~Princess of the Pearl
So Will won't hurt Jack or Lizzie (even though he'll try)? That's a relief.
And baby makes three, how exciting!
Good chapter, as always. Keep up the good work! I love this story!
~Princess of the Pearl
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I missed a couple of updates and ...Oh shit...Will is a hell of a bastard!!!Looks like Jack's punishment wasn't tough enough for him.I hate him more than ever!
Continue soon!Hope he will get what he deserves...
Continue soon!Hope he will get what he deserves...
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will certainly has lost all his marbles, but that won't stop me from hating the guy if he harm's one hair on Jack (or Lizzie's) head!
Good chapter, keep it up!
~Princess of the Pearl
Good chapter, keep it up!
~Princess of the Pearl
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. Bad feelings ensuing. I'll try not to worry too much, though. Will might cause some trouble, but we all know that Jack can kick his ass (up and down) any day of the week!
Good chapter, as always. Looking forward to more!
~Princess of the Pearl
Good chapter, as always. Looking forward to more!
~Princess of the Pearl
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Wonderfully written. I really can picture the characters with your dialogue! (I esp. like the way you write for Barbosa). GREAT WORK!!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how sweet! Nice lil' chapter, I liked it. :D
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, very well written!
“I did not…I did not allow them t’ have their way with ye…I simply allowed them t’ decide what they wanted t’ do.” LOL! I loved this line, it was so Jack-like. I can totally imagine him saying that!
I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the good work, darlin'!
~Princess of the Pearl
“I did not…I did not allow them t’ have their way with ye…I simply allowed them t’ decide what they wanted t’ do.” LOL! I loved this line, it was so Jack-like. I can totally imagine him saying that!
I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the good work, darlin'!
~Princess of the Pearl