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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Personally, I would prefer to have the graphic scenes of Will (and whatever it is the crew does to him) left up to my overactive imagination. However, it's YOUR story, so do what you want to do. You could include them if you want, just make sure to add a note at the beginning of the chapter so that anyone who is uncomforable with rape scenes can skip over it.
Good job, luv, keep it up!
Good job, luv, keep it up!
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
I'm leaving town tomorrow and will be sad not to be able to check for updates! Keep up the good work, darlin'!
~Princess of the Pearl
I'm leaving town tomorrow and will be sad not to be able to check for updates! Keep up the good work, darlin'!
~Princess of the Pearl
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far!The whelp needs to get what he deserves but I must say I'm afraid of what Jack is up to,lol!
Waiting for an update!!!
Waiting for an update!!!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, I want to say this story is good and has loads of potential. Good job!
However, I'm not sure if Will would rape Elizabeth, no matter how angry and upset he was with her. And while being raped back for such a crime does seem a fitting punishment, the idea of Jack doing it makes him seem unredeemable.
Still, I do like this story and am quite intrigued to see where you go with it!
However, I'm not sure if Will would rape Elizabeth, no matter how angry and upset he was with her. And while being raped back for such a crime does seem a fitting punishment, the idea of Jack doing it makes him seem unredeemable.
Still, I do like this story and am quite intrigued to see where you go with it!
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Darlin', you really HAVE a creative mind! ;o) Will needs to be raped before he gets killed.... hehe... what an idea! Precisely the right punishment for him! Though I have to admit that I have a little problem with Jack doing that.... wonder what Lizzie thinks about this.
Excellent work again! And thanks SO MUCH for updating so frequently, it really makes my day.
Take care,
~Sassy~
Excellent work again! And thanks SO MUCH for updating so frequently, it really makes my day.
Take care,
~Sassy~
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is already wonderful! But it's definitely in need of more writing ;o) Something is missing..... like... Jack and Lizzie together :o)
Please keep it up, it'd be wonderful to read more!
Hoist the colous high,
~Sassy~
Please keep it up, it'd be wonderful to read more!
Hoist the colous high,
~Sassy~
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ye're very welcome, hun'! :o)
This new chapter took an interesting turn of events and I'm sure that the pirate code says something about this, at last with a hint towards actions like Will's. I would keelhaul him.... lengthwise. In the end there should be nothing to haul inboard :oP I guess my dark side is coming to the surface..... anyway, thanks a lot for this new chapter and I'm looking forward to read more from you!
Hoist teh colours high!
~Sassy~
This new chapter took an interesting turn of events and I'm sure that the pirate code says something about this, at last with a hint towards actions like Will's. I would keelhaul him.... lengthwise. In the end there should be nothing to haul inboard :oP I guess my dark side is coming to the surface..... anyway, thanks a lot for this new chapter and I'm looking forward to read more from you!
Hoist teh colours high!
~Sassy~