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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
!!! AAUUGGHHH NOOO I love the story, I love how you've kept so very true to the feel of the movies and the characters and wow, but come oonnn! Poor Lizzy! My heart jumped into my throat when you brought him back. I'm sure you have a plan but, just, augh! Keep updating!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately for Will, I think he should remain deceased for Jack's and Elizabeth's sake since it has taken so long for Elizabeth to finally accept her feelings. Good story. Hope Elizabeth tells Jack and they get hitched.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hear a redition of 'Let's Get It On' playing in the background. I love this. Keep going.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like she needed some rum and some jack to like cool her nerves. I never knew alchohol could do that to someone. Oh well, still Jack will get some soon and he won't have to down any coke for it.
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I like this one, but I hope things work out for Elizabeth and Jack. Ten years apart is an awful long time when you cannot be with the one you love and not have him living for you.
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so anxious to read about Singapore!!Hope that this stupid Barbossa is wrong about Lizzie...She HAS TO forget the whelp.And she will!
Great job ,darling!Thanks to you there is always something sparrabethy to read.Thank you!!!
Great job ,darling!Thanks to you there is always something sparrabethy to read.Thank you!!!
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, especially regarding the idea of Barbossa being keehauled length the Pearl... hehehe... can we have that some time... any time... soon? ;o))
Wonderful writing, you're always making my day with every new chapter you write.
Hoist the clours high!
~Sassy~
Wonderful writing, you're always making my day with every new chapter you write.
Hoist the clours high!
~Sassy~
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No!!!How can she cry for Will after THIS,huh???I don't get it...How can she even THINK of him after making love to Jack???
Poor Jackie...She used him and broke his heart...I think...
Great steamy chappie,mate!
Poor Jackie...She used him and broke his heart...I think...
Great steamy chappie,mate!
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.... very dark story! I love the second chapter, good to see that Jack cares for Lizzie. And I wonder what the witch in Singapore has in store to help her.
Wonderful writing, please keep up your excellent work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Hoist the colours high!!!!
~Sassy~
Wonderful writing, please keep up your excellent work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Hoist the colours high!!!!
~Sassy~
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!Another chapter!I loved it as always and I can't wait to see Jack making Lizzie forget Will...She HAS TO forget him!
More please!
More please!