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by kitsunedreams

schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I applaud your courage of taking on such a difficult couple. This is probably one of my favorite pairings ever. Beautifully written, very romantic. Only problem I have is the OOC around the end. I like them forced together, gun pointed to Han's head. Some nice bondage rape, of Boba teaching Han a lesson. But I'm far to lazy to write a fiction, I think it be awesome if you wrote more with Boba and Han, they go so well together.
5/5
person Tusken
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I have to say that I'm huge fan of Boba/Han myself but I have never managed to write anything or actually find any stories (if you have any, can you please send links with email?).

Anyway, I liked your story. The beginning was very good, but the end was bit too rushed and I think that Boba should never ever remove his helmet when there is other people around. Maybe lift it a bit if its necessary but nothing else. The ending was bit too romantic for my taste as I believe that Boba wouldn't start relationship this easily.
But if you write more I will read it. It's always nice to read some stories of Boba & Han.

P.S. Sorry about bad English. It's been long time since I wrote anything in English.