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July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved this...so hot! I wish it was more than a one shot though, LOL.
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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue with this? I would hate for it to end there. (lol)
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Thank you soooo much for this! It was amazing! If you wrote this that well, Breaking Barriers will be even better! Can't wait!
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, extremely hot interaction and still so sweet and in character I think. I think it was a wise decision to have him stop time in the story it would really cheapen the whole thing otherwise. Perhaps it is not in keeping with Jareth's personality totally, but as you have written him- having an authentic interlude with Sarah, finally he is wise enough to remove that personal an interaction from the "I tricked you" list.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a fitting pen name. You certainly are an artist. The beautiful story you painted captured her innocence in all tha she was feeling for the first time, Jareth's lust and his tenderness, and desire to please her. Everything was so vivid, every sensation, it all was so wonderful. *sigh* Thank you for sharing your work of art with us. *happy sigh*
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far, are there going to be more chapters?