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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was great. You handled Patrick's personality well. The Joker's too. Thanks for sharing this. It was fun to read.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it and what an interesting pair! You describe everything so nicely, gets a good picture in the mind. I'm such a huge fan of the Joker and I love how you wrote him. Good job madam!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...crazy, filled with gore, and 2 psychopaths.... I give it a 4/5 for now
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I feel like I'm a fly in Bateman's roof. Both characters are well written, and it makes a twisted sort of sense that they would make good partners in crime for this particular situation. The disenchantment Patrick feels in the beginning is succesfully conveyed through the text right from the first paragraph. And I have to admit I had a chuckle at the last sentence.
For less than 500 words, this is good work!
For less than 500 words, this is good work!