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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story was amazing! So cute. :) And their dialogue and actions were so in character, I could hear their voices in my head as I was reading the story. I totally loved this, and I hope you write more like it. :D
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was cool that Chazz saved Jimmy and beat the hell out of Hector. I could believe that silly man would have a damn GPS in his beloved special brush.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter wasn't as funny, but keep going. I like your story and I think it is great that you are going off of the movie with the way they talk to each other. It cracks me up. Great story.
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I like that Jimmy fought Hector, too bad he didn't total him.
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Windows to the soul. That cracks me up. And Chazz is supposed to be the dumb one?
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Manly like Murder Suicide? That was just classic! This story is so fricking funny. I love that part about the horse whisperer. Chazz is so stupid. I love it. You are doing great keep it up!