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for Jack's Descent

by blood-and-lust-87

schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
~~~The final chapter has been fixed!! Thanks for pointing that out!~~~
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Um... grr. I can't read the last chapter! Did something happen to it? :(
person Jenny
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think there's something wrong with the last chapter. All that's visible is your Author's Note. I don't know if it's purposeful or just a glitch in the site... Either way I'm not happy haha.
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yet another very entertaining chapter! I was so very HAPPY to see that you had updated. :)

Poor Harvey! While the Joker was having fun with him I couldn´t help but cringe.

"Stop licking yourself, Harv! Hey, stop licking yourself!"

LMAO!!! I loved that part!! The sick part of me LOL when i read that line!

This was a gory chapter but I loved it! It was just the right amount of gore, not overdone. This chapter was WELL WORTH the wait. Keep up the wonderful work!

I just love how the Joker decided to come out while Harvey was around..I was hoping that would happen. I just love how you write the Joker, I can visualize him so well whenever I read your stories. You really do make him come alive!

Very nice work!!
person noodlez
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh! i seriously squealed when i saw you updated this, another fantastic chapter lovely! barn sex yum! can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see an update to this story! I love this! Great work, as usual, and the sex was VERY HOT. :D yayyy for smut!
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know this has nothing to do with this story, and I apologize, but I noticed that you are also reading my favorite House story ever...A Prank Too Far. ^.^ I can't wait for an update on your stories. ^.^ XXOO
person noodlez
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is sooo good, you HAVE to update this. ive read your other stuff and this is by far my favorite!
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That filthy Maroni! I actually felt sorry for Jack, but then the Joker came out and I was actaully happy when he killed Maroni. Lol
He was a dirty bastard!

I feel for Rachel. Poor thing, she´s still in love with Jack, but more and more of him is dissapearing as the Joker takes over.

Awesome work as usual! I was hooked on every word, from start to finish! I so look forward to the next update!
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, after reading this Chapter with Rachel in the hospital, now I feel reallly bad for her. Not that I think rape is so hot or anything but any sexual interaction with the Joker turns me on. So you didn´t do anything wrong, you wrote it VERY well, and although I found it hot, I also did feel for her. But I can see I was the only one who thought the last chapter was hot, so I guess i´m a just a big ol´weirdo..lol.

Anywhoooo..great work on this last chapter. Very emotional and so touching! Jack struggling against becoming the Joker, yet you know he isn´t able to keep the urges back. And the way you wrote his internal voices..very well done! This story is just simply BRILLIANT. I cannot wait for more!