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for Jack's Descent

by blood-and-lust-87

schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, first off let me tell you that I wasn't necessarily turned on nor sickened by the rape, it was disturbing and I could feel her agony and shock when she saw the scar. Interesting to note, that it was a scar that made her realize it was Jack and not something else, like a birthmark or mole.

As far as this chapter goes, I have to tell you I wasn't too thrilled in the beginning, but now having thought about it, the idea of Jack's struggle with the Joker trying to gain control is unique and can offer some really incredible chapters, the question is are you up to the Challenge? LOL!!!

I predict this is going to be one hell of a story, but when its over, you will be exhausted and not from school. I can see you taking a break after this one, if never writing another Joker story, for awhile, quite awhile.

Can't wait for more!!!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was just AWESOME! Wonderful chapter, and so utterly hot!!!!!!!!!! I´ll probably have to read it at least a few times more. Great job!!!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, my heart ached for Rachael. When she realized that the Joker was actually her Jack....Poor thing. *sigh* Do we get inside Joker's head next time? What he was thinking while all of that was happening? Did he remember her? Did he know, when he plucked her off the floor? Oooh, if he did, and he raped her anyways....*shivers* Poor Jack. Don't know how I can conjure up sympathy for him after what just happened, but I think anyone would go nuts after what happened to him. I like how you put in the fundraiser scene..that was one of my favorites from the movie. I am counting down the days until it comes to DVD. ^.^
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea..this gets better with each chapter!! One of my favorite parts was when the voices began talking to Jack. I´m guessing hat´s when he was tryly "becoming" the Joker. It was very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and cannot wait for more!!
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG are you kidding? This most definitely did NOT suck!!! True, I can't wait to get to the darker shit, but this was an incredible filler!!!

WELL DONE!!! And am biting my nails for more!!!
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can´t wait to see what happens in Chapter 4! This is a really good story and this last Chapter only drew me in further. I know you´re busy but I do hope you´ll update soon!!
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that's so awful. I knew it was coming, I was praying that he wouldn't hurt poor Penny, but no dice I guess. I got chills when Jack growled, "Why so serious?" I can't believe the cops thought Jack killed his sister and mother too. Well, Rachael can testify that she saw Paul hurting Lenelle at least. Oh poor poor Jack. My heart ache for him. I mean, as I said before, I knew it was coming...but still. *snugs Jack* Poor baby. Great update!! Can't wait to read more!! XXOO
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schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MOLY!! This is AWESOME!! I LOVE it!!! And can't wait for more!!! How is he gonna respond towards Rachel and I LOVE how jealous Bruce was.

schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh please please continue
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter...now I wait for an update! I´m looking forward to the angsty stuff :)

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