rate_review Reviews

Excellent chapter, Grace. Your descriptions of labour were enough to make me sore again! :) Glad you are getting the chance to explore this new realm; it has so very clearly captured your vivid imagination. Regardless of the genre, I always enjoy your writing.

When I first read your story, I couldntget into it....I don't know why. I was bored and skimming the fanfiction movies when I saw your again and decided to give you another chance...im sooo glad I did! This story is great! Pleeeeeaaase update ASAP! Bad cliffhanger! (Sniffs)

Awww...such a beautiful scene between the Professor and HB....well the whole thing was wonderful but that's the part that really caught my eye.

Like always...i can't wait for more...*and i'm still jealous*
psyche b

Great chapter yet again. I'm so happy that I didnt have to wait long for you to update again. I have noticed though that you have a thing for cliffhangers....u_u *§igh*. Please dont torture me >.< I'm very excited to see, what else happens. I enjoy your writing style, its very developed. So very easy to be enveloped in. I'm glad AFF.net changed the sub menus to include recently updated stories from all categories, or else I might not have found your story. Thanks for writing and I'm hoping (begging?) for the next chapter to be out soon. _|¯|O ←me humbly hoping for a swift update

Kurojin ♥♥♥

Again with the evil cliffies. Arrg!! I knew that his father would be disapointed. I'm glad he came to accept it, and realized that he spoke a bit too harshly. Poor Larena. At least she's getting some drugs. The most magical words a laboring woman can hear. I know. ^.^ I noticed Red didn't mention the speediness of her pregnancy. And OH NO!! What's going on Larena? I am thinking and hoping that it isn't something bad, and that it is twins or something. Well, I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. ^.^ XXOO

Is it TWINS!?

Wow, this is a great story. I'm very excited for the next chapter. I like your Original Character. I've greatly enjoyed reading your stroy so far and am anxious to see what else you have in store. Great flow, characterization, and imagery. You have alot of skill and talent in writing.

AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! You give us such evil cliffies woman!! Thank you for updating by the way. ^.^ Hurray Abe is there, and he's helping her. I am wondering what his explanation is going to be for this parid pregnancy. I am also dying to know what the professor's reaction is going to be as well? I am sure Myers is going ot be all pissy that HB was hiding Larena in the compound, and that he knocked her up. I imagine there is going to be loads of confusion on everyone's part, perhaps Manning bitching about having one, well two more people to have to take care of. But I doubt that's going to be an issue, I know Larena is going to be a great mother, and won't give anyone any trouble. Oh, I shall try to wait patiently for the next installment. XXOO

C'mon C'mon C'MONNNnnnnn!!! *dances around excitedly because patience has never been my strong suit*
Okay, that's out of my system. *L* LOVED the update. I'm glad Abe is there, but I also love how you portray Red as being so caring, trying to keep Larena calm and reassure her. Of course he's the same Red we know and love with everyone else.

And I have to say I'm a little jealous because I can't update nearly as fast. *pouts a little*
Looking forward to more!
psyche b

*finishes screaming in frustration*
Geez and i thought that i was nasty about cliffhangers and making people wait. *L* i like the idea of the abbreviated pregnancy, and the feeling of awkwardness while walking without really knowing why. The 'other reason' you mentioned was brilliant too! What a way to tell people though. "She's been hiding here for weeks now. Say hi, and oh by the way, she's having my baby...right now." I don't know if i would be brave enough to try and write a conversation like that....but i'm REALLY curious to read one!!

Totally loved the new chapter and i'm beyond flattered that you would make reference to my story at the beginning of it.
psyche b