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by LaurenGraceJurious

schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Grace,

Although I don't know much more about Hellboy than what I've seen in the movies, I am SO glad to see you were finally able to post Chapter 3 (this despite all the *other* demands placed upon your time by certain unnamed authors! *ahem*

I am really liking your story though - it's amazing how strong that bond between your characters is already, and the movie plays itself out in my head seamlessly. Keep going, I so enjoy your writing regardless of the genre!

Laura
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I totally squeed when I saw the update. Honestly. LOL. Wow, I wish I could have a pregnancy that short. Only 5 weeks and that's it. Kick ass. And oh crap is right. LOL. Poor red, and poor Larena, they were just gearing up to tell the professor, and everyone else, how in the hell is that going to work now, she's in labor!! Sheesh. LOL. Oh Abe, hurry up, and don't ask too many questions. There isn't much time!! And Larena is probably going to start really freaking out soon. Oh poor thing. How is she going to have this baby? Is he or she going to be ginormous, requiring a c-section like she fears? Oh Lord, this is an evil cliffie. But I have confidence that you will get us another chapter out quickly. What's his father going to say? What's Manning going to say? Oh gawrsh, I'm just so eager to find out what's going to happen next!! *grins* Well, off to read the next chapter of Adrift, and I can't thank you enough for suggesting the other HB story to me. Any other stories you think I should read? I would read anything you suggest because you have fabulous taste. ^.^ XXOO
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ACK!! I really hope you just meant "The end" of the chapter. I was so happy to see another chapter added to this story because your beginning was so interesting. I'm terrible about checking back for stories i enjoy (too busy writing too many of my own!) but i'm glad i did today. I loved the detail you used...especially about the herbs.

Lack of reviews disappoint me too sometimes...but usually my muse won't leave me alone anyways. *L* If you're enjoying it...WRITE IT!
Looking forward to more!
psyche b
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*groans* People are so damn stingy with reviews. That irks me to no end..seeing the counter climb, and hardly any votes and reviews. As you are aware, I always leave reviews for a story I enjoy. It's the least I can offer in the way of thanks for a talented writer taking the time to write and publish a fantastic story. I like Hellboy. I think it's a bit sad that I think...Ron Pearlman is it?..is hot as Hellboy, but not so much as himself..although he does make a semi-dashing "Anarchist". ^.^ And you should make no apologies for using OC's. If the so called loyal "shippers" don't like them, they don't have to read the story or offer their criticisms for them being used. They don't HAVE to read the story, no one is making them. I like this story, I am sad that you don't want to finish it..it's good, and I want to find out what happens. You did good research on the "nun stuff" and the "herb stuff" in regards to the witchcraft. I myself am very anal about that sort of thing, and often spend as much time doing research as I do writing the story itself. Even though I don't watch "Sons of Anarchy", I will read your story, as you are a fantastic writer. I think I have two of your stories left to read, R&R. Your Elizabeth/Jack one, and I forget the other one. ^.^ XXOO
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Please continue!
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I have to say, I like seeing outside characters introduced. I guess that's why I use them in my fics.....the unknown quantity is always most interesting because you have to figure out what it is. And, if you have a good story to tell, you're qualified to tell it. I hope you write more.

psyche b