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"The Joker returned to the door, this time fully opening it to reveal two very disturbing sights; one, himself, in leather chaps--nothing underneath--and a steel-studded black leather vest, and two, Bruce trussed up on the bed, naked, face-down with a ball-gag in his mouth."
That is the best picture in my mind right now.
Long awaited 17th chapter! Can't wait till next one, Please keep writing!

More people need to give you reviews, because this is excellent! : D I am really enjoying your writing. I hope you continue! <3

Oh I LOVE it!! I just read the whole thing because I couldn't stop. The kinkiness at the end was great! It IS important to keep things exciting in the bedroom, lol! Thanks again for your great story & fantastic writing! Can't wait for more!!

XD Rachel's reaction is the best. I really love the plot twist of Joker the Father of the year! I can't believe you haven't got more reviews! But believe me, you should keep going! You're the only reason I go on aff anymore! Good luck, and I can't wait till next chapter!
-Amiraa

Shoot, I thought that I had left a review for the first chapter but I didn't. Well I'm sorry i got so caught up in you wonderfully story that I kept right on reading and didn't review. I'm just lazy to leave a review for each chapter. The relationship between Bruce and Jack just had me at huh. But it seems to work for them. Thanks for writing this great story.

Review as you asked for.

I love it, I keep waiting for each next installment and I am wondering where you are going with everything. I love your Jack.

do you have any idea HOW long i waited for this?!?!?!?! any ways i really love rachells reaction!!!! muhahahaah! i loved that brucey-boy just knocked her for a loop!!!! and i would love for jacks little man to be a part of his life again. any guy going threw that kind of life and getting back on their feet just so they could be with them. i know of some guys who are in this VERY same spot in life. just hoping for a happy ending for them, just once.

laters!

miko ~_^

Gah! Cliffhanger be damned... I can't wait to see what Jack has been up to!
Poor Alfred, his young Master is sleeping with an ex-con...
It sounds kinda like a Jerry Springer Episode...
Jerry: So you Bruce, have been fighting crime for what, 20 years? And Jack, he was the Joker, and just when he says he's clean, he pulls a houdini?
Jack: Its not a big deal! He's over reacting like he always does!
Bruce: Its not over reacting when Gothams most wanted is living with you!
Jack: WHY DONT YOU TRUST ME!?
Audience: FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT
Alfred: I just want to say that when Bruce donned a skin tight bat costume I knew he was in the closet.
Bruce: o/////o
XD Sorry, anyway...
Can't wait till next chapter! Great work!

Oh forgive me for not reviewing again sooner. I've been kinda....out of the loop. But, I really do love this story. The dialogue alone is fantastic. And the smut is awesome. You really made them work as a couple and that is a major feat!! The romantic in me wishes that they could continue like this... Ah well. Great work my friend!!! Please update soon!!

Woah, I'm not realy into slash fics. But this has caught me eye. It's a really different take on all the other Dark Knight stories. Looking forward to more.
Btw, thank you for your review on my story. :)