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for Not Done Yet

by seditionary

schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, that was very entertaining <3 The whole thing, I'm a little sad to see it appearing to be over, actually. :(
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo I like :)
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this is good! Please keep posting :3
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay I remembered my PW for this account on here! XD well I really enjoyed reading this story so far, I can't wait for you to update!
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely amazing.
I adore your style of writing,
and you capture the characters very well.
[[I've been reading since chapter 4,
and I just now registered so I could review it for you =].]]

Keep up the terrific work!

-xcaptaincrashx
person Lulu
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! *bows humbly* That was fantastically hot and beautifully written and I can't wait for more. Wow!
person noodlez
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww!! this frickin adorable, ahhh i love
person Lusive
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it !
I wanted to see some of this pairing SO MUCH since I first saw TDK. <3 You've done them beautifully-- keeping their characters in tact through the slashage. I especially love how you handle the Joker's character.

Constructive thing: Rachel and Bruce sound a little fake with each other because each uses the other's name when they talk too much. The repetitive Rachel, Bruce, Rachel, Bruce just doesn't sound real.

I hope lots more is coming soon! :D

Also, I know its probably done a lot-- but I'm curious to see some about Jack's past too. In TDK he gave two stories about how his face got scarred. Maybe he doesn't actually remember it because it was too traumatic? Or maybe he lies about it a lot ? Might be an interesting thing to fuss around with.

Anyway, keep up the great work! I'll be eagerly awaiting an update! :3 Oh and happy new year!
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! You are back!!! GREAT chapter!!! My heart went out to Joker, but he's also a survivor. Can't wait to find out what happens next!!! You are such a TEASE!!! Hurry Back Soon!!!
person Lulu
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO...very exciting! Can't wait for more! XXOO