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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh,what a great start! I nearly melted like Lizzie did.It was so hot...Need to read more!
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!*melts* I absolutely loved Jack's idea to hold back and make her want him more,make her want to come back to him again for more!
I'm sure she will never forget their little tryst.She will ache for him like never before.Great job on this chapter.I'm so happy there is still another one to read^^
I'm sure she will never forget their little tryst.She will ache for him like never before.Great job on this chapter.I'm so happy there is still another one to read^^
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew she wouldn't be able to forget Jack and his magic fingers :)Hurry up and update asap.Please!!! Need to find out how Lizzie will welcome Jack^^.
I find your English very good.You are doing a fantastic job.I know from my own experience how tough it is to write in a foreign language- so big,huge credit for you!!!Hugs!!!
I find your English very good.You are doing a fantastic job.I know from my own experience how tough it is to write in a foreign language- so big,huge credit for you!!!Hugs!!!
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again brilliant chapter! Can't wait for the update!
JackSparrowsWench
JackSparrowsWench
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great goin'! HOT...
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great! Realy, I loved it! Well done, keep goin'.
“This is wrong, Jack.”
“I know, Liz’beth. But feels right, doesn’t it?’
Yeah!...
“This is wrong, Jack.”
“I know, Liz’beth. But feels right, doesn’t it?’
Yeah!...
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story has incredible potential so far! I love it and cannot wait for the next chapter!! You write very well for these characters and I thought your English was wonderful.
JackSparrowsWench
JackSparrowsWench