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for Broken Arrow

by Duckie

person lilyoftheval5
schedule May 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Such a pity this wasn't finished. The idea is interesting, Rebecca's POV fascinating. Also really made me wonder what Malachi is thinking and how he is going to approach the offer. Good job! Though... I think Malachi IS handsome; But to each his own. :)
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wooooooooooo hot! =D
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so far i enjoy it, please write more. =]