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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far. Hope you can continue. Would give me a second story to check up on. Good job.
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this was really good. I liked all the details and the fact that I could see the surroundings and everything. Haven't seen such good writing in a while, and its cheered up my day quite a considerable amount.
please update soon!
please update soon!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It seems so interesting! Please continue.
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heaven's above! If you don't continune, I'll have to hunt you down! WONDERFUL! Beautifully written - love the descriptions. Please keep going!!!