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Awesome Sarah/Jereth fic!!!

giggles...oh yes she had owl in her.....thats awsome!

From this chapter, I learned it's probably a bad idea to read this while I'm at work - people give me funny looks when I fall out of my chair laughing :)

It's a toss up about which line was better in this chapter; the fast food one, or the "She was going to get a little owl in her..." line. The latter had me laughing so hard I was crying, the former successfully knocked me out of the chair.

I liked that you spent time with Jareth in his owl form - most people just tell about him flying to/from somewhere and that's about it. Loved the conversation between him and Draco (oh, he's going to be sooo mad!), even though Draco was a tauntin' ass...And, I dunno about Sarah, but I think I'd be just a little more than pissed to find the goblins ate my cell phone (Jareth being careful with her purse was awesome, by the way) because I'm pretty sure phone insurance doesn't cover that...

Really, what can I say about this that I haven't already? You're bloody brilliant! Can't wait to see what happens next!

~cu-kid

Oh man, you are so funny. I always get hopelessly excited when I see an update. You have no idea. ^.^ I loved the scene with Sarah and the Goblins. That was funny. The strainer hat was a nice touch. LOL. It was so sweet how Sarah was worried about Jareth returning. I liked the spat between Draconis and Jareth, and I loved his solution to the problem by getting rid of her phone. She's not going to be too happy about that. I am still eagerly waiting for the time when Jareth will discover Draco's presence on set, and that he is who Sarah was seeing. It was so sweet that he cuddled up with her on the couch in that Hello Kitty robe. (was it hello kitty?) Her reaction to him coming back was nice too. Happy to see him and all that jazz. Oh, almost forgot, his apprehension at reaching inside her purse was funny. And her reaction to his nudity under the robe was just fantastic. LOL. Best freaking line ever, handsdown...."If she kept making noises like that, she was going to have a little owl in her." My husband looked at me like I was nuts, I was laughing so hard. LOL. Thank you, again, for writing this story and for sharing it with us. It is well written, witty, everyone is in character, and is just all around awesome. I can't wait for the next installment. XXOO

Ho boy! That last scene was tense! I can't believe he said that to her...now I wonder what her reaction will be! I'm thinking something along the lines of wide eyes and slack jaw because I'll bet she didn't see that coming, haha.

I felt bad for Jareth in this chapter, which I didn't expect when it started. But from the moment he realized she didn't mean her kisses (which she kinda did, didn't she? Or, at least, enjoyed them...which I guess isn't really the same...) all the way up to his last line, I just wished something would happen. I cheered up a bit when they went to the bowling alley ("Suffragette City" *snickers* That was awesome. The whole Rock Band scene was hilarious!), but then Draco has to call! Grr!

I didn't think it would be possible for me to be any more addicted to this story than I already am, but the end of this chapter was kind of a cliffie - because now I want to know what happens when they get home (assuming Jareth is still staying with her)...sheesh, won't that be uncomfortable...which is awesome :) Looking forward to the next installment!!

~cu-kid

Loved the RockBand and the bowling. LOVED that she made him sing "Suffragette City". The references are just adorable. Of course it was perfect for him. LOL. And loved how the girls thought he was...well...himself. I wonder what kind of conversation they are going to have back at her place, if he ever goes back. Well, at least he knows Draconis is Aboveground now. But when will he learn that he is the one Sarah is dating? I imagine he will throw quite an impressive tantrum. I am very eager to "see" it. So the cat's out of the bag for Sarah concerning the script change. I wonder again, if any of those kisses count, she seemed willing enough. Poor Jareth. All he wants is a chance, because he loves her. It seems that Sarah does too, or at least feels a powerful lust for him, and who wouldn't? LOL. Stupid Draco. I think that's cheating. But then, what would a story be without conflict? Boring. LOL. I guess Fae don't quite follow the same set of rules and fair play that we humans tend to stick to. Fabulous update as always. I tried to read this last night, but my son was jumping all over me. LOL. I will attempt to wait patiently for the next installment. And it's good that you write ahead, so you can update more expediantly. Maybe I should try that so I would torture my readers less with anticipation. LOL. XXOO

I never really know where to start with my reviews for this story because, as I'm reading, there are so many things I find funny or interesting that, by the end, it's all kind of a jumbled reaction of, "Hahaha-uhoh-snicker-oooo!-what the-that's neat-goblins in the cabinet-snort-oh!-hahaha!" ...

Was Jareth really asleep when Sarah came home, or was he just messing with her? I'd like to think the latter, but either way it got a good reaction out of her (making her ever more aware of how attracted she is to him...even in a Hello Kitty robe *snicker*). And, OH! She's making out with Draco?! Haha...uh oh...Ooooh, I'll bet that'll piss Jareth off more than if it was just some random guy...especially if it gets rubbed in his face ("Well, I don't know why you're having such a hard time, Jareth. I mean, I snogged her." Hahaha). Despite that, I kinda like Draco...for now. I mean, I'm a little wary of him, naturally, but he seems nice...

I think Jareth's reaction to Sarah magicking him out of her room again this time was awesome - I like amused Jareth more than angry/annoyed/pissed off Jareth. He's going to have to be a little more creative (and maybe a bit more...sincere...) if he's going to get her to kiss him for real, though. I can't wait to see what his devious mind comes up with!

Random musings: I wonder what Sarah will think once they show up to rehearsal and she reads the "improved" script. Interested to find out if Sarah's magic will ever extend to shape-shifting (and if she will be an owl). Loved the change in her pajamas - details like that are always so great. And I wonder just how pissed Sarah will be when/if she finds out that Jareth and Draco know each other...

Great chapter! I'm excited to find out what happens next!

~cu-kid

Jareth is going to be PISSED when he sees Draconis on the set, and even more so when he learns that he was her date. Ans Sarah is going to be peeved I'm sure to discover the script has been changed. I love your references to David Bowie himself. And I snorted and choked on my spit I was laughing so hard at the goblins eating coffee, and imagining them running around her appartment like George of the Jungle, (Java java java java java java java) and eating her furniture. Jareth was so wicked, tempting Sarah with his hot bod like that. It's nice to see that Sarah does have affection for Jareth though she tries to push it away, does that kiss on the cheek count? Draconis didn't specify WHERE the kisses had to be....which leads me to naughty thoughts. LOL.

This is so funny!!! I love it, please have more soon!! :)

OOoo! Jareth having to see things from Sarah's point of view! I love it! MORE! The goblin audience demands MORE!!!