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for Deliverance And Destruction

by Jacksfavoritewench

schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohh man .. i hope lily can find a way to get away from will.. and i hope elizabeth is going to be ok .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey,another chapter! Keep going,hun! I enjoy this story so much... It seems that you are the only author here who updates on the regular basis, LOL! Unlike me and the others :P

Hope to see an update real soon or even much sooner^^

HUGS!

Addicted to Jack
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Fantastic chapter! I think that the sickness could be a combination of being pregnant and maybe some type of food poisoning? That may be a suggestion for you or maybe she caught some type of disease while she was on the run? Fantastic chapter! I hope my ideas help you! Update soon!
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aaahhh you need to punish Will! No one likes him anyway. Keep updating, I can't wait for more!
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great chapters! I can't believe that Will is going to leave poor Lily at the brothel! I think it's about time that karma kicks Will right in his arse! I CANNOT wait to read what happens next! Update soon!
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great chapter! I LOVED the steamy scene with Jack and Lizzie! Please update soon!
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Instead of letting Will sleep with her, Lily should castrate him and teach him a much-deserved lesson.

Jack'n'Lizzie are very sweet together.

Good job - keep it up!
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Truth be said, I do hope that Lily wouldn't have to go through it. It's simply too much of a sacrifice to allow the whelp
touch her and kiss her, not to talk of letting him bed her! Poor Lily! I hate the whelp. omg, how much I hate him!!! *rolls eyes and sticks her tongue out*

As for Jack and Lizzie, well...*naughty smirk* some smut wouldn't hurt^^ I love reading good Sparrabeth smut!

Keep up the great work, matey! HUGS!

Addicted to Jack
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I've been waiting for you to post and when I finally got on to this website, I saw 2 new chapters! Yay! Excellent work as usual! I think that the JE love scenes are way past due! Time for some more JE love! As for Lily, I think that Will is going to notice that she doesn't want to have sex with him and then he'll probably stop. But since Will is evil now, I don't think he'll stop. Update soon! I can't wait!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go on,matey! Please update soon!Need to find out what's ging to happen...