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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohh man .. i hope when will dose find out that gabriella ange lily will get out of there safely ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Everything seems to be going well now, but will William give up??? I don't think so...Well, can't wait to read more! You are awsome!!!
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I absolutely LOVED both chapters! Wow this story rocks! It keeps getting better and better everytime you update it! My heart is pounding! I love how you've explored Will's evil side. I believe that you're the first person who has dug into Will's evil side. Who would have known that that side of him exists! I am so glad that Jack has rescued Elizabeth! I CANNOT wait to see what happens next!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fan-freating-tastic darling! I had absolutely NO idea that things were going to turn this way! Wow! i€'ve never seen a storyline like this! Update soon! I wonder how things will unravel after this!
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'm speechless.I'll just say: CONTINUE!!!
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You made me hate Will more than ever before!And truth be said I had no idea I could hate him even greater ,hehe ^^
Hope that Jack won't allow Will carry out his vicious plan...
Hope that Jack won't allow Will carry out his vicious plan...
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter. Women fighting is always fun, LOL! Lizzie should forget about Will and leave with Jack ... and their unborn baby :)
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved the fight between Elizabeth and Miriam! Wow now Lizzie is pregnant! But with whose child? I guess we'll find out! Great job!
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! What more can I say? It's about time Lizzie came to a decision about ending it withh Will! I can't wait for the fireworks in the next chapter between Elizabeth and Miriam!