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for Deliverance And Destruction

by Jacksfavoritewench

schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! When did you post chapter 11? I swear Ikept checking back this weekend! Great chapters! I think Miriam will tell Will about the affair! I hope Elizabeth makes a decision to go away with Jack, since she said that she knows that Jack is who she needs to be with! Update soon! Maybe this time I'll catch up quicker!
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schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aHHHHHH TELL HIM TELL HIMM NOWWWW RUN AWAY LIZZY RUN AWAY GO WITH JACK
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Will and Mariam gonna go at it like Jack n' Elizabeth? Everyone is meant fer someone. Jack with Liz and Will with Mariam. Will is showing the signs of affection to Mari. I hope everyone gets who they have always wanted.
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Elizabeth had better break off the marriage with Will now. Jack said the 3 most sacred words!
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schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh update i want will to find out i want lizzy to gt all preggo and have deadlocked bebes
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Great chapter! I kind of had my suspicions about Miriam. I knew she had the hots for Will! I wonder when she finally tells him, will he believe her? I'm thinking that she wants to tell him for her own selfish desire for Will. She's probably hoping that he'll fall for her and leave Elizabeth. Wow! You sure do have a thickening plot! It can go either way! My eyes are truly glued to this fic! Update soon!
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schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TELL MIMI TELL omg it would be so great if she told i would be happy if will found out and committed suicide of something and jack and Lizzy would be together
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... I guess she WILL tell.Oh this Mirriam should just take care of William ,tell him she loves him and live with him happily so that Lizzie could forget about the whelp and stay with Jack!
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schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahaha CAUGHT hahahaha
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow you posted so fast! I can't keep up with you! Great chapters as always! I hope Jack finally finds a way to tell Elizabeth that he loves her! Take care!