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for Deliverance And Destruction

by Jacksfavoritewench

schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh,another round of their steamy lovemaking! Keep going:)
I wish Jack told her that he loves her...But anyway I think this will come with time.
I wonder if Miriam can indeed keep her mouth shut? We'll see...
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for this wonderful ,steamy J/E passion! Your love scenes are so sensual,so special...You inspire me a lot!
Please go on.I'm waiting for chapter 9 :)
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm not surprised that she is more willing to spend some passionate moments with Jack
than to save her marriage:)Go Elizabeth!
Please update asap.Love it.
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man! Those two can really go at it, can't they? ;) They better be careful, too, or else Lizzie's gonna start poppin' out little pirate babies...

Good job! Keep it up!

~PotP
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay Sparrabeth!

Good chapter, as per usual!

~Princess of the Pearl
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! First off, thanks for the shout out! Second, I just read chapters 5-7 and WOW! Fantastic! I couldn't stop reading! Update soon! You are a really great writer and you update fast! I should start doing that with ManEater! Well, hope to read more soon!
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay Sparrabeth!! And Will... gross. Will is just gross.

Great chapter!

~PotP
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You made me drool with this one! Oh holy mearmaid,that was a mental orgasm ....Need more!
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What was Will thinking while he was making love to Lizzie? We all know Lizzie felt disgusting, but what of Will's thoughts and feelings?
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HA HA! 'Liz'beth got drunk! Jack's probably thinking, "Wow, she's even more tipsy than when I am drunk!" :I snigger: