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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, don't end there!!! Grrr. Need more. RIGHT NOW!
In all seriousness though, great chapter.
~Princess of the Pearl
In all seriousness though, great chapter.
~Princess of the Pearl
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, Jack seems a might-bit determined, doesn't he? Pirate or not, be better not do anything criminal in his pursuit or I'll have to jump into your story and kick his butt.
Here's to hoping Elizabeth comes to her senses soon and dumps Will to be with our favorite captain!
Cheers to another great chapter. Keep up the good work! I'm anxiously awaiting Chapter 5!
~Princess of the Pearl
Here's to hoping Elizabeth comes to her senses soon and dumps Will to be with our favorite captain!
Cheers to another great chapter. Keep up the good work! I'm anxiously awaiting Chapter 5!
~Princess of the Pearl
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yessss!Go Jack!Need to make her yours...
Great chapter,mate.Please keep goin' :)
Great chapter,mate.Please keep goin' :)
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!!!! Can't wait to see if Lizzie gives in to her temptations!
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jack and Liz should TOTALLY runaway together! They would have such adventures!
Will is too possessive of Lizzie.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Will is too possessive of Lizzie.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Here's to hoping that her marr-i-age to Will *doesn't* remain intact! Go Sparrabeth!
Another fabulous chapter! Keep up the good work!
~Princess of the Pearl
Another fabulous chapter! Keep up the good work!
~Princess of the Pearl
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! Loved it as usual!
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Keep it up!
~Princess of the Pearl
~Princess of the Pearl
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH! LOVE IT! I love it when Will gets unnerved about Jack being near his little wifey. What's Will gonna do about Jack being so close to Elizabeth? Try te kill 'em again!? Will they all get sucked into another perilous adventure insearch of some forbidden object to free Jack from the King of Spain's grasp?! Oooh! that even sounds good. But I bet yer story line is better!
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I freaking bloody loved it!! Please, please, please continue with this story! I need to see what happens! You have a fantastic storyline! Please continue! I loved the part where Jack was watching Lizzy the entire time she pleasured herself! Great job!Fan-freaking-tastic!