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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy the concept of this story because I'm fascinated by movie killers, their motivations and histories and such, but I found it so difficult to get through because it was written in the first person- when reading a story with a narrative you can easily insert yourself (pardon the pun) into any character you want, you can be the "he" or the "she" that's on the page, but when a story is told as someone else's experience its hard to engage.
Something I also find difficult in stories is the presence of nicknames being used a lot and I find that hard to relate to as I personally don't answer to or call other people by variants of their given name.
These are just personal taste issues more than the quality of your writing, I just hoped perhaps it would inspire you to write something of a similar nature with those adjustments....a girl can dream.
Overall, 3.75 of 5 stars!
Something I also find difficult in stories is the presence of nicknames being used a lot and I find that hard to relate to as I personally don't answer to or call other people by variants of their given name.
These are just personal taste issues more than the quality of your writing, I just hoped perhaps it would inspire you to write something of a similar nature with those adjustments....a girl can dream.
Overall, 3.75 of 5 stars!