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Love it!!!

Once again I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Way to be an Ass Hector. If you'd let the girl talk... *huffs* MEN!

Eager for more!!!

OokamiMomo
aka Cuilleann

Oh, delicious! I'm so glad Hector pulled it back a notch or two when Elizabeth asked him to take off the hat - a brilliant flashback/forward! It was quite right for him to be more gentle for her first time, but at that, he's still himself - a bold, brazen, ever-randy pirate. This story has definitely not gone in the direction I expected, but I'm so glad it did, and I do so look forward to more! I'm sorry I haven't had the time to read sooner, but good things are worth waiting for!!!

Keep writing!

Cheers,
FQ

Whew !! Great ! you rescued my day ! Chap 30 is up ! ( looked several times a day for an update ) With this story I became a barbossabeth junkie (and made me sleepless nights too ! ) I stopped reading at chapt. 26 because i won´t read this story too soon to the end,....but then i read chapt 29 too, of course... you described Hector so cute i could fall in love with him ! And now that flashback with that ridiculous hat and tickling feathers... cool effect, i´m dying of couriosity !!!!

OMG,OMG,OMG....what a love - scene ! * jump under my cold shower * That was now another great summit of the story. But now i´m afraid that something worse could happen to our principal actors during that battle tomorrow ! Please, i beg you, keep Hector and Liz alive....my heart would break into small pieces....I would carry both with barefoot to the fontain of youth... this is a worse cliff hanger you know... aaarrrrrghh !!!!!

What can i say... You know that you have done a great story here...without any doubt i can say thats one of the best stories i ´ve ever read ! Wonderful in - character Hector, those mysterious flashbacks Elizabeth has, that thrilling and touching love - scene between them, that sad jealousy - scene between Hector and Marilyn, that all drives me deeper and deeper into that story and those fantastic characters. I´m wondering when Elizabeth find out more about her and Hectors ( I love him !!! ) history in the past, can´t wait getting more informations about it ! With trembling fingers, goose- bumps on my arms, burning notebook, i´m now reading further.... PLEEEEAAAASE KEEP WRITING !!!!

Oh what a wondeful story ! I cannot describe my feelings with my own words as i would like, because english is not my mother language (come from germany ). It is a unusual story fic about PotC, but absolutely well written, gripping, exciting...!
I love the relationship between Hector and Liz because in the third movie something subtile ( sexy ? ) grew up between them, i can not explain. I believe that´s the guy, Hector, is the pirate Liz really desired and dreamt of since her childhood. And in the whole third movie they match perfect together in all matters.
I really love Hector Barbossa´s character ( physically too, of course... hehe..)and especially his dialect ( West Country accent ? What is it ...).
I´m reading now chap 5 and i´m so curious that i may not sleep tonight !!!! Love it !!!!

Oh my. As usual, fantastic updates! 28 was action packed, it set me on the edge of my seat, made me laugh a bit, and cringe and even, cry. You naughty girl you! Lovely choice sending everyone back. They would be happier where they were instead of in the present and I think after a time, I would hate living through centuries and centuries, so I'm sure they are happy. What a night to send them back to. Absolutely perfect choice, but of course as the incredibly talented authoress of this story, you knew that. You made an absolutely seamless transition from the And present into the past. Great job. As usual I was able to picture everything quite vividly thanks to all the effort you put into the details. And holy cow, I got goosebumps when I first read that Barbossa was wearing a feather hat, and then when she said the same thing she said in her sleep after their first coupling in the present....Barbossa was wrong. And I am dying, as I hang by my eyelash from the cliff of doom, while I wait to find out what his reaction is to her utterance. LOL. Evil cliffhanger woman! Although, I think you could say I'm the pot calling the kettle black....LOL. I can't wait to read more, as always, and I eagerly await the next chapter!

XXOO
Ero

I like it!!! Barbossa's being a bit of a cad, but he's just making her admit what she's felt for a long time. Grand work, and I look forward to seeing where you'll take them next.

OokamiMomo
aka Cuilleann

Oh my goodness! I am so glad I finally got to reading these chapters, because what a wonder they have been! I love Norrington and his ever-shifting loyalties. Beckett's death that perfectly echoed his demise in AWE. And I LOVE where you went with the mirror. It hit me that they'd have to use the mirror somehow just a few paragraphs before Calypso spelled it out for them, and I'm SO glad you decided to go there! Just when it looks like this story is about to wind up, you throw a fantastic curve ball like this into the mix. I cannot wait to see what happens when they go back, and what the big day is! "I've made my choice, what's yours?" "Barbossa...." Oooh, I'm all a-twitter with anticipation now! Thank you so much for sharing this story, and I cannot wait for the next chapter now!!