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Wonderful, simply wonderful. I could read this all day long. Please keep going. I think I will go crazy with anticipation. Thank you writer.

Andrea

This is really good, I hope that you continue it! I am wondering about the pairing though. It seems that you are planning to pair Batman with both Dr. Crane and the Joker. Which I suppose is all good and well, I'm just curious about which one of them Batman is going to end up falling in love with--I assume he will fall in love with one of them, that usually happens in fanfiction, lol! I hope it's Joker, personally. He and Batman belong together. ^^ Anyway, great job with this. You've done really awesome with keeping everyone in character. One plot hole I noticed: If Gordon and his men know that Joker had threatened to blow up two elementary schools on Thursday, then why not just have all the schools cancel classes on Thursday so that nobody would get hurt? That was the only major thing I thought of (I didn't quite think the super smart and fast genetically-altered horse was quite realistic, actually, but hey, it's your story) that maybe needs correcting. Everything else was pretty good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon!

All in all, this is an amazing story. It's very well written, much void of errors, and you embodied the characters splendidly. I'm going to have to keep my eye out for this one. ^^

I love it! You have a real talent for writing action, that I admire. And I really enjoyed your versions of the characters. VERY intriguing. Update soon!!