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for Butterfly Complex

by anacsadder

schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was great! I'd never even thought about this pairing before (though I have been wanting to write some Oogie/Lock for a while, admittedly) but it works perfectly. <3 I really hope you do write some more on this subject.
person Rose
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, but I wish it had a more complete ending. It did feel like it left some things hanging. Like, for one, Oogie's back. And he'd want to challenge Jack, right? And Shock was supposed to find out whose side Lock and Barrel were on. I wish you would have made it longer. I really was enjoying reading it. And I was wondering what would happen if Sally and Jack caught on to what Shock was up to. Haha. Anyway, I hope you do a continuation of this story. I'd love to read it. :)
person Rose
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. :D
I love this story! :D:D
But... GRRR... a cliffhanger. D: Please update soon! :D I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. ^.^ I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
And you mentioned that you might do a sequel? You definitely should. It would be awesome. *Nods*
Aaand one more thing before I go. That song fits amazingly well. Lol. :P
person Rose
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME story. I mean it. This is the best Nightmare Before Christmas story I've read ever. :D I can't wait for you to update! Please do it soon! ^.^