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by JaneKrahe

person AlBelle
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. GOD!!!

I am so enthralled by this fic, you HAVE to write more! I love it so much!!!


Pleeeeeeeeeeease?
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Squeee! I have fallen in love with this fic. Please update soon, I need to know what happens.
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*whimper* More please? Are you going to finish it? I want to know what happens...!
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You should really update I know it's hard to find a muse once it's danced away. I find it quit hard sometimes too! I've got my muse caged and working on new additions. I love Grilo! He doesn't always have to be a douche just like Pavi could be the good son. They're still human even if they've been so cold and hard hearted in this gothic future. I love your story! Here's hoping for some Grilo in the sequel *wishing for that to happen too*!
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now, usually, i hate Grilo unless Graves is being a huge douche to Shilo, raping her, drugging her, whatever.
but, i have to admit that i like this one. i'm only on chapter two or three, but some of those little details make me grin madly.

i'd be pleased if you offered some constructive criticism on the repofic i'm working on... it's published here as a work in progress.
person Zellezra
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story so far. It flows very well and your writing style really animates the setting and all its characters. I love how you've portrayed Pavi's character (I'm not biased at all :P), and you've got me itching to see what happens next. You best hurry up and finish that next chapter, or by Odin I will pester you until you work out a restraining order! <3
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
brillant. just brilliant. you really captured shilo's life of being sheltered, being stuck in the same house for her whole life. this is a great story. cant wait to read what happens next!
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The concept of the relationship between Shilo and the Graverobber is so sweet! Please continue writing it! Please, please, please!
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please PLEASE update soon!! it's nearly 4am and i read this all in one sitting! i NEED to know what happen s!! this is the best Repo fic i've read! please finish your (amazing) story.......
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep going, please. Love the pairing.