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for Time to be Serious

by fearmyautobot

person eve
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is a really good story i love the ending and the fact that she never gave up, Arien has amazing strength!! also your style of writing is awsome keep up the good work :)
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean by the Joker being a "higher class criminal". I for a long while thought that (and kinda still do) until I read a comic about the Joker by Brian Azzarello, who not only has the Joker rape someone, but also has the Joker constantly drinking and doing drugs. I loved the art and hated to comic, but I wondered if the movie Joker and Brian's Joker could be crossed what it would be like, and thus my story.


I'm thinking about a sequel, but no promises.
person DarkRoze
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ugh!! You've got to make a sequal or SOMETHING....this ending although fine for the backstory of the kids conseption does nothing to tell us what the Joker will be willing to do to get his son and his Baby's mama....OMG BABY MAMA DRAMA JOKER STYLE!!!! For real though, the only thing I saw wrong with this story was the concept of the Joker RAPEING I mean really he is a higher class of criminal, at least thats my thought.
person Mademoiselle
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw...and you stopped at 8? It was getting intreasting.
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous stuff. Um she had his baby...baby boy was safe? Where did he end up? I guess he was safe since she did not flip the heck out when he said he had blown the building she lived in. Oh well you will surely tell us more stuff later on :)(slides story link into her book mark toolbar) See ya laters!
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for you to update for so long! I loved this chapter! Hurry and write more! :D
person Shyann
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I just started reading this it's really good!
Can't wait to read more soon!!
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update! please! I enjoy this story very much.
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg please continue this I love it! sex scenes are a bit too short though xD lulz ha ha great job ^_^
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That last line was freakin' amazing. Not many author's manage to make a scene turn from something completely dark and serious, so something so funny and erotic. More would be nice...like tomorrow.