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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More More More More More More More More More More More More More PLEASE!!!! Omg, I can't believe it took me this long to find a story as brilliant as this, and I saw your triplet pic on Devineart - I added you - and OMG!!!!! When is he gonna give birth?! I am literally on the edge of my seat in anticipation. I can't wait to see Thrax do something really fluffy and daddy-like after their born like...rocking one of his babies to sleep or reading to them or...AHHH!!!! Just update already!!!!!!!!!
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wedding bells... sweet sweet wedding bells... Loved this chapte especially how you reincorporated the master/slave beginning! I cant wait for the wedding! I do wonder though, if they can see the baby will they know its sex before it is born?
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffy! I love the suspense and emotion in this chapter. Please keep up the good job!
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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Satan's unholy boxers!!! That is SO EVIL!!! Evil, demonic cliffhanger of DOOOM!!! RoAr!! You better update soon.. Now, all that rage aside, I'm curious if you have an actual explaination for Ozzie's 'charm'? He reminds me of Gambit from the Xmen with how he can just lure people in like he does. The why of it is starting to bug me mildly, however that cliffy is torture!! Just FYI, pure torment I tell you!
Update SOOON!!!!!
Update SOOON!!!!!
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story. That said, in my opinion which may or may not be shared by my fellow readers, the last two chapters seem to be taking on a sappy nature. The reason I loved this story when I first read it was the conflict and emotions of the two main characters. Now that Drix is in the picture, you'd think there would be a lot of mention of conflicting feelings with Ozzie. He loves Thrax and is loved in return but the reason he betrayed Thrax was he did not want to be used to kill anymore, which is what his new test is. I know as a writer your story is like your baby but I ask that you consider my advise.
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And I thought MY family was bad! YEESH! Well I hope Ozzie does well! ^.^
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well....
Okay.
So, I was... surprised... to say the very least, when I started reading this story. The plot drew in me in but the fandom pushed me away. I was further surprised by the fact that I am really, really enjoying the story. The characters have been interesting and very true to their canon personalities. I'm really impressed. This has turned into one of those fics that's made me look sideways at something I would've never seen yaoi/slash in to begin with. Great job.
Now update or I'll eat your soul :>
Okay.
So, I was... surprised... to say the very least, when I started reading this story. The plot drew in me in but the fandom pushed me away. I was further surprised by the fact that I am really, really enjoying the story. The characters have been interesting and very true to their canon personalities. I'm really impressed. This has turned into one of those fics that's made me look sideways at something I would've never seen yaoi/slash in to begin with. Great job.
Now update or I'll eat your soul :>
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chp 18 was a nice filler but I cant wait till the next chapter!
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omfg! Thank you! Thank you so bloody much!
D: I was nearly crying when you got Thrax caught! Then when you had him nearly killed?! D:
I could kill you myself. TwT I was like "Nuuuu! TwT" all the way through reading the last couple of chapters!
I love this story so much! You must keep writing!
It's not like... mindless sex, you actually have a plot and romance, but not that over baring romance that makes you want to puke, you know?
>w< Please keep writing more. I want to find out what happens to them. And the child! =O
D: I was nearly crying when you got Thrax caught! Then when you had him nearly killed?! D:
I could kill you myself. TwT I was like "Nuuuu! TwT" all the way through reading the last couple of chapters!
I love this story so much! You must keep writing!
It's not like... mindless sex, you actually have a plot and romance, but not that over baring romance that makes you want to puke, you know?
>w< Please keep writing more. I want to find out what happens to them. And the child! =O
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, way to get them out. Yeah seatbelt back lash sucks. Can not wiat to read more!