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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
your losing me with the threesome thing I probably wont read beyong that. but anyway,i really like the story though.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, please continue~ again again again
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude, seriously freaking MORE :D
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff! more please!
ch6
ch6
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you and your story are fucking bombbbbb
and yes, thats a good thing :D
and yes, thats a good thing :D
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. update soon
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwww! I'm glad you brought the lovin' in this chapter. I really like that he got the concept of sex, most men who've done it countless times don't even understand the depths of being physical with a female. The way he see's and treats Dee makes him a beautiful person in my book. Bravo chica! Bravo! Now getting to the freak in him, I really loved it when he took charge like a man should but new when to relax and take it slow. That right there is so fuckin' sexy! Also, not making it to painful for Delores was a smart move. That would've really taken away from the scene and Jason probably wouldn't have enjoyed it as much if he felt like she was in pain because him.
Another well written chapter! Take a bow!
Another well written chapter! Take a bow!
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
10 more cool ponts for another Great chapter!
5 for some hardcore smut!
An extra 5 because you're just cool peoples!
Let's add that up ladies! Bringing you to...20 cool points! Oh! let's not forget the 10 from the chapter before! Can I get a drum roll please! That brings our total to........30 cool points!
(I know I'm crazy!)
Can't wait for me.
Add when you can.
5 for some hardcore smut!
An extra 5 because you're just cool peoples!
Let's add that up ladies! Bringing you to...20 cool points! Oh! let's not forget the 10 from the chapter before! Can I get a drum roll please! That brings our total to........30 cool points!
(I know I'm crazy!)
Can't wait for me.
Add when you can.
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hate you! I hate you! Naw I'm just playin'. I don't hate you chica! You just gave me something to look forward too. That was another wonderful add.
Oh! And there's not need to say you're sorry. There's no rush on perfection. Plus I completely understand shit happens sometimes. I hope everything's good with your mother now. You only get one so take care of her.
Okay! Okay! Back to the story. There's something about unconditional love that really turns me on. The fact that someone loves you nomatter what is a beautiful thing. You can do no wrong with them and that's what Dee and Jason have.
Awwwww...they both said their I love yous in their own little way. Dee just came right out and side it, which was very brave of her for someone who is normally so shy. Jason let her know he returned the feelings by finally letting her see who and what he truely his.
On to the juicy stuff! I have to say Jason is a good study. He picked up how to work them lips on Dee's lips and lower lips quickly. I can't wait to see both of their reactions when they experience having sex for the first. I really love that Jason loves all of Dee's inperfections and that in his eyes she is perfection.
Girl, this was another hot banger! Add when you can chica!
Don't forget you rock!
Oh! And there's not need to say you're sorry. There's no rush on perfection. Plus I completely understand shit happens sometimes. I hope everything's good with your mother now. You only get one so take care of her.
Okay! Okay! Back to the story. There's something about unconditional love that really turns me on. The fact that someone loves you nomatter what is a beautiful thing. You can do no wrong with them and that's what Dee and Jason have.
Awwwww...they both said their I love yous in their own little way. Dee just came right out and side it, which was very brave of her for someone who is normally so shy. Jason let her know he returned the feelings by finally letting her see who and what he truely his.
On to the juicy stuff! I have to say Jason is a good study. He picked up how to work them lips on Dee's lips and lower lips quickly. I can't wait to see both of their reactions when they experience having sex for the first. I really love that Jason loves all of Dee's inperfections and that in his eyes she is perfection.
Girl, this was another hot banger! Add when you can chica!
Don't forget you rock!