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for Strange Stirrings

by SquireMuldoon

person Shyann
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please post more asap.
person Lamenthatic
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to THANK YOU for being gutsy enough to put this up. I adore monster/girl romance especially when hurt/comfort is involved. I was so hopeful that there would be something like this around, and you totally wrote what I was craving to read.

Your characterizations are wonderful. I love how you articulate Jason's twisted perspective, and his fumbling, simple inner voice. This kind of story just doesn't quite satisfy unless you have a good view of what's going on inside the characters. Your writing puts focus on all the right things.

I can't wait to read the sex scene, I hope you update soon! I expect some great stuff. :D
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm lovin' this fic already. Nice beginning and I love that you don't take yourself to seriously. I don't know why but I love Jason smut. What can I say? I'm a freak! I can't wait till he puts it on ol' girl! I'm on to the next add! Keep it coming chica!
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"his porcelain doll" Awwwwww that's just so fuckin' cute. Oh...listen to me I'm saying Jason said something cute. You're story's very different from most Jason fics I've read on this site. Most of them are about Jason finding some random chick and fucking her brains out just because he suddenly discovered he had a dick! Okay so yeah your Jason is kinda discovering he has a dick but I can tell he truely feels something for this girl more then just wanting to throw her back out and I dig that. Can't wait for the next add!
person Tracy
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is brilliant! please, please, please continue!