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for Her name was Crystal

by theredangel

person Anon
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy reading your story. I like jason's soft side although I would hav liked it if you had him pelting crystal with snowballs. I hope she doesn't remember the awfull things that happened to her. Keep writing!
person Hawk
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the hunting part. The story is all around excellent. It draws me. I really hope Crystal doesn't have a total recall on her traumatizing event. Anyways please update soon. I like your writing.
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loving this story...and you write style...
the way you speak of jason is amazing...please update soon ;)
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
REALLY GOOD
can't wait for the next chapter!

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