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for Every Bit of Her

by avari20

person Elleyis
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well written, a wonderful insight into Nuada's feelings and desires for his sister.
person Holly
schedule May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wonderfully written. I absolutely love the forbidden, doomed idea behind this. You captured Nuada perfectly. I buzzed through pages of fiction before finding this beautiful, well written blip. Nicely done.
person lilwitch
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story literally takes my breath away! Your writing and your words are completely stunning. For your first fic, the way in which you chose those words echoed every bit of pain, anguish, lust, and love. You could feel his torment and her rejection. Very well done!! Please--Continue these two if you can!
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM


This is great! Simple, concise, and gets a very strong mood across! I love how you keep up the connection between them consistently throughout, and you really use the title line very well. Great getting into Nuada's head!
person DoubtfulGrace
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought this as by far one of the best Nuada/Nuala stories I've heard. Your really good at your word choice and you tell this so well. I very much hope you will make another different story involving these two. Thanks!