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by TheViriiTwins

schedule December 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is possibly my favorite Matrix story, you did such a great job!

schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm very happy that you have uploaded so much so soon. I love the Twins, and I enjoy Bethany's character. I wonder how The Merovingian will react to waking up on the bathroom floor. Hopefully his ego and pride arent as big as they apprear to be. A bruised ego can be killer. Cant wait for more to unravel about how deeply the twins feel about Bethany. It was neat that Bethany already knew the proper names for the twins, and that they apear to be telepathic. I wonder what other surprises they have instore. Great job so far, and even better the rate with the updates. I'm axiously awaiting more twiny goodness. ^o^

Kurojin