rate_review Reviews

I loved it..it's nice to see Jason portrayed accurately.

Moar? Moar. Moar....? -puppy eyes-

That was a Really great Stroy,Great Job,I really liked it.

Awww, that was a wonderful firsy sex scene. Popped your cherry eh? Kind of a weird genre to do it in...but I'm not complaining, I love this story. Reading Jason's reactions to everything was sweet, honest and genuine, but I can't help but feel a foreboding....now that they are together, and things are going alright, I can't help but feel there is a tragic ending. I just don't see Jason as a domestic type to have a family and such. ^.^ " *Grunts* " translation - "I'm going out to kill some bad people in my woods. Have a good day honey, I'll see you at dinner. Kiss the kids for me." LOL. I can't wait for the next chapter. I actually did a happy dance when I saw this one posted. ^.^

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Forgot to tell you how the sex scene actually was, since you asked specifically for criticism on it...It was very good. I never would have known that it was your first had you not told me. I also thought Jason's reaction to getting head was sweet. Obviously, he liked it, but was able to control his baser instincts for Rose's sake, much to the couch's detriment of course. ^.^

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please tell me that you are still working on this. i love it

RE: sex scene

Again! Again! Yey Jason for getting some nookie! Yey! Again, can they do it again!?

Ohh god. I ran across this completely by accident... and it is THE CUTEST THING I'VE EVER READ.

Awwwww!! That was so sweet!!! And I love how he is trying to sort out all these feelings that Rose is stirring within him. Poor guy, he has no idea what's coming.^.^ This is still a wonderful story, and I can't wait to read another installment.

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EXCELLENT~ KEEP IT up!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!