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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chemistry between is great. This is my first Friday 13th fic, (well, I've never seen the movies either, but of course I know exactly what it is). I never imagined that something about Jason could be so sweet and funny.
One of my favorite parts was when Rose started running from him, and so, like a friendly dog, he starting chasing after her. Because that's what he does. I was giggling!
Your writing style itself is enjoyable to read. The way you word things--I just like how you put your words together. Like your "good boy-good girl" paragraph. And you put so much information and feeling using such a small amount of words; every sentence delivers something.
And your good with the awwwww factor. That was so tweet when he was touching her cheek!
Even though this has been really cute so far, I get a sense of foreboding. It can't be good for Jason--or Rose--to get so attached to her when she's going to eventually leave. And he's setting up alarms around her house....
Thank you so much.
One of my favorite parts was when Rose started running from him, and so, like a friendly dog, he starting chasing after her. Because that's what he does. I was giggling!
Your writing style itself is enjoyable to read. The way you word things--I just like how you put your words together. Like your "good boy-good girl" paragraph. And you put so much information and feeling using such a small amount of words; every sentence delivers something.
And your good with the awwwww factor. That was so tweet when he was touching her cheek!
Even though this has been really cute so far, I get a sense of foreboding. It can't be good for Jason--or Rose--to get so attached to her when she's going to eventually leave. And he's setting up alarms around her house....
Thank you so much.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So....I was kind of wary when I saw what the story about...I thought it would be cheesy and stilted, and cliche, but...it's not. It's really good, I like it. I love the way that you add in his mother's voice, of course, it wouldn't be much of a Friday the 13th story without Mrs. Vorhees. I also liked the way you had him show Rose his name. As a little boy I am sure he could have recognized it, and I can really see him writing it like that for her. I hope this is making sense, I haven't gotten any sleep. I "awwwed" out loud when he went crashing through the forest looking for her, his concern is very endearing. You have a lovely style of writing, very easy to read, you get in all the important information without overwhelming us....the details and descriptions are wonderful. I cannot wait to read more. Hurray for insomnia!! twoot twoot!! LOL
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i cant wait to see what happens next! great job please update soon!
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i likes, keep going...im a jason fan myself
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhhh! I love it. KEEP IT UP
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! I really like this story!
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!! Can't wait for the next chappie!
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a huge fan of the horror genre, but I'm quite enjoying this! Please write some more, you've a good start here.
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was fantastic! Please update again soon.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, more Jason stories! ^.^ Looking forward to another chapter~