rate_review Reviews

I first read this back on hentai-foundry, where are the rest of the chapters?

I have to agree with the other reviewers that, while I read this expecting to get a 'comedic experience' it certainly wasn't the story itself that was comical, it was totally the tongue in cheek way you chose to tell it. You've a very fine sense of what will amuse and attracts your readers.

The sheer volume alone of the hits on this fic, vs the number of reviews, isn't really that surprising considering the content, but it certainly deserves praise for the way you pull it off. Crip, clear descriptions, the method in which you explored Ahsoka's predicament and Anakin's 'rescue', all strategically chosen and well executed.

While the characters aren't exactly true to form, there's a certain element of each one that you chose to prey upon and, in choosing those characteristics, turned this into something of an amusing, if racy, story.

I was pleasantly surprised to find I enjoyed this; you've a very distinctive style that was thoroughly enjoyable. Well done :D

funny story i like your style of writing its not all 1st or 3rd person but a mix of the two, looking forward for the next chapter.i had one question if ahsoka is almost the most gangbanged padawan who is the most gangbanged

please continue story is kinda funny half expect ahsoka to kill anikin now and how many "adventures" has she had. anyway great story needs more soon

I was set to find this ridiculous, but mostly just found it amusing and a little hot. The ridiculous part isn't in the writing style, which is sturdy, nor the characterization, which is actually pretty true to form - Anakin's a big horn-dog, and Ahsoka is 'friendly', ha. Also, I like the title. Way to be cheeky!

This was a really funny story.