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November 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Freaking sexy! I want more!
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story you’ve got here, I really like it! The plot’s great and character portrayal’s too, as well as the character interaction, of course! The story itself is also beautifully written, but you’ve a few typos here and there though-out the fic, you also need to use more commas in your sentences, just a tip!
The smut’s very nicely described but perhaps a bit outdrawn don’t you think?! Oh, well, never mind! I miss one thing though; the dialog, I need it, other than that everything is fine! I hope you write more though, because I’d love to read more, so please do!
The smut’s very nicely described but perhaps a bit outdrawn don’t you think?! Oh, well, never mind! I miss one thing though; the dialog, I need it, other than that everything is fine! I hope you write more though, because I’d love to read more, so please do!